Pirahna sports coupe by Nahum

Cinema 4D • (none) • posted on Feb 13, 2003

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This is my second attepmt at a car, and is still a WIP, so all the details etc are not done yet. Just wondering what people would think and get some feedback so i can improve it :)

Comments (7)

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Euxeb007

1:05PM | Thu, 13 February 2003

Sympathetic car. But the tires are very skinny.

1:35PM | Thu, 13 February 2003

Not bad, I also think the tires are a bit off - racing tires do have less rubber, but the tire just seems to be off somehow. The car's proportions seem a bit off- though maybe it's the angle. It's a very good start though.

ron_mcphatty

2:34PM | Thu, 13 February 2003

look great!:) definitly needs more detail, lines for where the doors are etc (although dunno how u'd do that!), and maybe bevel the tyres to make the edges less sharp! lovin it so far!

Nahum

4:17PM | Thu, 13 February 2003

OP and Euxeb007: yeah,your right. Something was bothering me bout the proportions...its now blindingly obvious that the wheels are waaay too big and the tires...well yes, the tires need much work before they look like tires! thanx :)

FAKE

5:47PM | Thu, 13 February 2003

I know how hard it is to model a car... its damn hard!!! And I agree about the proportions... also theres something wrong with the front-window, the horns on the back are not much aerodynamic... and the wheels are to big and the tires need some roundings here and there... I hope this helps a bit... at all it`s a good job now and with some work it will become a great car. ThanX for posting! ~{o;)

zarth

12:22AM | Fri, 14 February 2003

The proportions are exaggerated and I assumed that was intentional. Reminds me of some models done by mickeymouse. Like it very much. The rims are bit too exaggerated...need a bit more rubber. And, improving the tires would help alot. Here is an excellent mini-tut from the Rhino forum on tires by y@. http://www.renderosity.com/messages.ez?ForumID=12371&Form.ShowMessage=1037335

Nahum

9:29AM | Fri, 14 February 2003

thanks :)