A Re-do of Sand Castles, a colored pencil drawing by Lorrainejoy

2D • People • posted on Jun 12, 2003

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I added more shadows and color to this portrait. do you think it needs more work? I am not happy with it. Critiques will be welcomed.

Comments (8)

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SophiaDeer

7:51PM | Thu, 12 June 2003

Excellent work Lorraine! A child playing in the sand brings back many happy memories of my childhood.

gallimel

1:13AM | Fri, 13 June 2003

For me it was amazing before.. so imagine now.. Faultless.. but I know you're a perfectionist, even more than I am :)Still.. I can't see any possible way to make this better :)

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crrunchyfrog

6:42AM | Fri, 13 June 2003

Okay...I've sat here for about five minutes now, staring, trying to critique, but I can't find anything wrong with this picture...couldn't see anything wrong with the first version either L Great work Lorriane, keep it up hugs

Odious

9:47AM | Fri, 13 June 2003

Actually.. I am not so sure why you are not happy with it... I think it has catured a moment in time that I can remember as a little boy... it is a wonderful work of art and I can only wish that you would have posted it larger... EXCELLENT work!!

Tanialmeida

2:35AM | Thu, 19 June 2003

one can feel your love shining throught ;0] superb work Lorraine!!!!

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ShadowWind

2:15PM | Sat, 21 June 2003

I missed so much on the few days I was gone. Including this one, great image...I love your work...

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flashone

9:27AM | Mon, 07 July 2003

This is much better than the other one. Definitely like your use of light and shadowing. John John definitely looks like he's been out in the sun (I think he's starting to burn). Has a nice bright "at the beach" tonality to it as opposed to a "digging in the desert" kind of look. Love all the little details in it. Leave it be sis, it's great ;D

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8:59AM | Tue, 22 July 2003

Wow, this is just beautiful. I know I'm repeating myself, but I can't help it. This is just gorgeous. He is so much into the "work" he is doing, and you captured it marvelously. Excellent!!!!!