the river - WIP by brantus_maximus
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Description
This is my first all out attempt at making a realistic river. I'm having a lot of trouble with the reflection whenever I try to animate it.
Any comments or suggestions would be very helpful.
Comments (1)
Moebius87
Lots of things very right about this, just some details that could be improved in the surfacing. For instance the texture stretching on the planks of that little dock are distracting. They might not be so noticeable if the planks were not so thick. Some weathering on the fishing rod, and less weathering on the bucket (looks to dirty to put your catch in). :o) I think you've done a terrific job with the water surface, although where the illusion falls flat is where your land meets the water. Something needs to happen along the waterline, either a discoloration in the land surface, or some kind of surface tension at the edges, or some profusion of low ground vegetation. Some sasquatch grass applied intelligently would really push this over the top. The quality of lighting here is perfect... i can almost hear the chirping of the crickets. Looking forward to your update. :o)