Dark Angel by Julie_Angel

Poser • Gothic • posted on Jul 23, 2003

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Comments (6)

Julie_Angel

7:45PM | Wed, 23 July 2003

hey! plz leave me comments so it can help me out! I did this mpicture 6 months ago and it was my last one. I think I might start up again but I want to have some comments to tell me what's wrong or what I could fix so I can improve them!!

Dash

7:52PM | Wed, 23 July 2003

A better lighting might improve it right now the lighting looks to plain also you might want to move her eyes make her be focused to your audience or something don't just let it stare at nothing like that, give her a bit of expression too but it looks good i would like to see more of your work. very well done :)

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Tom42

8:02PM | Wed, 23 July 2003

Wowser, i cant see anything wrong with this GOddess.it breathtaking image..keep up the good work..

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jwdell

8:05AM | Thu, 24 July 2003

Dash's advice is good, this is very well done, the only thing I might add is a little softening or blurring around the edges of the figure, keep rendering, your work is excellent!

reddog37

8:56AM | Thu, 24 July 2003

I agree with both Dash's and jwdell's comments. The lighting and focus is rather stark. A light or two more would cast some interesting shadows. Softening the focus would add to the fantasy aspect of the image. As is it is well done. Please post more of your work!

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antje

9:45AM | Thu, 24 July 2003

I actually like it the way it is too. Though I can see how the lighting and soft focus would improve the image even more :o) But because you said "Tell me what's wrong with it".. Don't think there's anything wrong with it. :o)