What happened to the beretta? It looks like it was overrun by a truck. By the way, the cigarette is not in the ashtrays hold, but it is piercing the ashtrays rim.

I dont really like the gun and the ashtray looks a bit strange. You should also work on the textures. What I like is the camera angle and the point of view. There is some drama in the picture, but it suffers a bit from the models. I am really looking forward to future pics of yours. It might not look good at the first glance, but I see some potential in there that you should work out.
Umm... how should I rank it? I think it is interesting. Render on and let me know if you should redo the scene! :)

this was the first time i tryed this i never knew it could be done in bryce the texture is 2d i am trying to figure out how to place it on that silly rock :) and how to get that rock solid thats why the truck overrun it :) the side of the gun needs some extrude or something Thanx for the comments on my work ill try to redo it and do it better greatz Poly

It's a very good try. I think you used a lattice for the gun: if this is the case, you may want to play a bit more in the terrain editor, maybe by clickin the "smooth" button 3-5 times to see if the model improves.

Yea, the gun is a lattice, which is a cool idea, but could have been thicker and smoother, check the trigger guard and how it spikes in some areas... Run some Equalize in the Terrain editor and the lots of Smoothing... Cory