Nap Time by mcadeowner

3D Studio Max • Architecture • posted on Aug 15, 2003

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Still Learning Max! Any comments and critiques are welcome. Working on my lighting right now. Using Max 5.1 Thanks in advance, Jet

Comments (15)

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ComplxMind

3:00PM | Fri, 15 August 2003

Really good. Excellent lighting. I would tone down just a hair with the floor reflection though. Seems more like glass than waxed wood. I've seen some really good buffed floors, but never seen one that reflective. ha-ha. It is an excellent render and you are obviously going for realism. That's why I mentioned the floor.

me-man

3:38PM | Fri, 15 August 2003

EXCELLENT WORK MAN! Man you are good! It looks almost 100% real!

BillyM67

3:56PM | Fri, 15 August 2003

Other than the floor, which is already mentioned, and perhaps turning down the intensity of the light on the ceiling, it looks fantastic.

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m3d

5:10PM | Fri, 15 August 2003

jo thats excellent:):):)

Tencendur

6:08PM | Fri, 15 August 2003

The reflectivity of the floor has already been mentioned, but it also appears that your radiosity solution needs further refinement. The samples on the ceiling are distracting, and the ring of light around the ceiling fan detracts from the realism. Also, all of the windows are glowing as if the sun is beating directly on them, but no direct sunlight can be seen streaming into the room. If the sun isn't hitting the windows you should be able to see outside... if it is, lets see those squares of sunlight on the floor, tables, etc! You're definately on the right track.

TheVelvetFoxx

2:18AM | Sat, 16 August 2003

Ditto the above comments. Overall, its an excellent render.

kennyliu

2:33AM | Sat, 16 August 2003

Very nice!

2:54AM | Sat, 16 August 2003

Lovely scene, great render !

TheAmoebaSon

3:05AM | Sat, 16 August 2003

why not try a bump map to fit the tiles of the floor with NO reflection, and yes - refine the radiosity solution. Other than that its great - i especially like the bed fabric.

mohammeds

4:36AM | Sat, 16 August 2003

are u a bigenner?..i dont think so..but u have some problems and all above have mentioned. if u fixe the radiosity and reflection it will be a great scene..try to put some good stuff on cieling...great

atom1972

5:39PM | Sun, 17 August 2003

WOW - That is a badass pic! very well done!!! - Jane

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ariaans

2:24PM | Mon, 18 August 2003

Very nice composition and modeling! Curtains could use some more detail to really hang. I think too much lightning comes from too many directions from the outside. You have to choose for one side from which the major sunlight comes. I agree with the reflection of the floor which is a bit too strong. You can also work with ambient light inside the room... I like the bed, the pillows and the air-blower much!

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