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Description
Hello. Im an industrial designer student and this is a modified glue gun that im working on.
Need comments and help on the rendering!!
Modeled in Rhino 2.0, rendered in 3DS 5.0/Brazil 1.0, HDRI used for reflections only, GI, standard modified 3DS materials
Comments (12)
snake6778
i wish to only be half this good some day. Nice work on the lighting!
David Orf
This is very good but try reducing the shinyness of the light grey plastic a little (no more than 10% less) it looks a little bit too polished, the same but more so with the glue stick they are usually very smooth but not very reflective lastly try reducing the light level very slightly if this were a photo I would say it was maybe half a stop over exposed
YL
A beautiful work, very realistic !
korborak
Very nicely done! I agree with David. Is there an option with a 3 feet long cord? ;) I would probably try to design the blue-gray main body section as only one piece. It seams very flimsy on top.
cocherof
Ok, thak u guys on the comments. Ill try ur suggestions, as for the glue stick, i knew it didint look real , but it helped the image;). Keep those post caming
Dobbelcheese
Breathtaking render and great design. I sometimes zoom out in order to make my render look better - you seem to do the opposite.. :)
TKraccoon
I love your design :) can't suggest anything knew than what's already been said, so...good job!!
jpac
I like the fact that it appears so easy to take apart and clean it. It's very innovative how the gun is able to stand on its own. Some existing glue guns have that bent metal kick stand, but they're hidious looking. One thing though, I would of chose different type of screws, or at least created an dive-in so it's hidden. Okay, one other thing, see how it'd look if you made the color of the trigger the same colour as the nozzle (chrome), I think it would pop more. Your modelling and rendering skills are awsome. Your clients will be very pleased. Excellent concept. BTW, what do you call it?
cocherof
Thanks on ur comments.Actually, im still a student, on my second year, so i don have any customers right now!! (unless u consider my teacher as my potential buyer LOL!) I called it Elepe , which stands for "Lapiz de Pegar"(the L and the P are spelled ELE and PE in spanish :)). It aint a big name, but as i modelled an rendered thats what i nemed my files, so, there. Once again, thak u all.
elari
Muy copadito!!! pero...me pa' que ya lo vi antes en algun lado. Por casualidad.... estudias en la U.N.L.P ??
cimchic
...real beauty!!!
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