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Perfection is...

Writers Romance posted on Dec 08, 2003
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How can I begin to express The way I feel today? I think it's time I must confess - My feelings in the fray. It's all so overpowering The way I feel today, Emotions all come showering; Through love I'll find the way. There's a sad joy in ev'ry touch, The way I feel today, I think I want way far too much, But is that so bad to say? When I taste your lips tasting mine, The way I feel today, Like sampling the finest of wines, I want more of you in my day. I wonder what I'm entitled to, The way I feel today, I'd like to stand and fight for you! To shake you, and say "Hey!" Can you believe that I love you? The way I feel today, For proof, is there something I can do? To have you come this way? I know you're etched deep in my soul, The way I feel today, Without you I could never be whole, My world would seem so grey. I'd like to give you guarantees, The way I feel today, To hold you and just say, "Please?" It seems the only way. Each parting like an incision, The way I feel today, Is it time for a decision? Where do I make my way? To feel your passion mixed with mine, The way I feel today, It really is so truly fine; I'll love you, come what may. I know you love me heart and soul, The way I feel today, Like beauty captured in a bowl, You show it so many ways. In ev'ry touch, ev'ry caress, The way I feel today, I shouldn't ask for more or less; Perfection is where we lay. You inspire and excite me so, The way I feel today, To lose you would be such a blow, Please don't go away. There's so much more I'd like to say, The way I feel today, I'll try to summarise, some way - My emotions in the fray... I want to impart a simple fact, The way I feel today, I simply ask you to remember that, Perfection is where we lay.

Comments (2)


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Nicholette

10:46PM | Fri, 26 December 2003

very beautiful, you should write more like this! :)

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meico

6:28AM | Sat, 14 August 2004

I think that there are some very lovely emotionally-strong stanzas within this poem. In my opinion it could be pruned quite considerably without losing any of its impact. This is, of course, just a suggestion - something to try and reject if it doesn't work for you. There is, as I say, much to admire as it stands.


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