Standing Strong by WhispersSoft

Writers • People • posted on Jan 02, 2004

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Standing Strong For my son Daniel My dearest child your my oldest I watch you grow into a man Seeing all that touches you Seeing all that hurts you Your standing strong and tall The Great Spirits have given you a pure heart This path you fallow is long and hard I will be their when you need When your standing strong I will sit back With pride Just remember your mothers love is as strong By Dee Simpson AKA WhispersSoft 6-30-03

Comments (3)

AngelSterling

9:41AM | Fri, 02 January 2004

very nicely put...........cant wait to see more

tjames

2:23AM | Wed, 14 January 2004

I was thinking of a line break just before your last line. The line "with pride" would then serve as anticlimatic and your last line would be the climax.

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