Random McGuire, Elven Inc. by Elfenone

Writers • Fantasy • posted on Jan 16, 2004

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Saturday, 21 June, 1997 11:56:18 AM Robin Minick (Elfenone) Random McGuire was feeling out of sorts over the past week's events. Amazingly she wondered how she came through all of this unscathed. The detective glazed over her with his eyes, wondering how someone as drop-dead gorgeous and rich could wind up in a mess like this. Randi, as most called the half elven, thought about what she would or could possibly tell this stranger about her friend. She began her story... Crossing her long slender legs as she leaned back with her arms straight behind her for support, Randi spoke in her silvery voice. Well, what can I tell you about Brent... He was initially my corporate mouthpiece, primarily my business partner, and eventually my lover and friend. She continued noting the detective's eyes intent upon her legs...she shifted uncomfortably and smirked at him...ahem! May we continue? Detective Melroni then interrupted...Ma

Comments (13)

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Bothellite

2:09PM | Fri, 16 January 2004

This flows! Wonderful pictures you draw here. This is a nice piece and you have THE writer's knack. I hope you believe that!! (and by the way I hope that there are renders in the works. I love this 3 foot tall dude)

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Elfenone

2:21PM | Fri, 16 January 2004

This is what I was wanting to do with this.. Make a Fully illustrated comic type series or fully illustrated book.. LOL It would be huge. Like an adult fairy tale.

Shakti27

2:30PM | Fri, 16 January 2004

Great werk Elfysis! S nice to see you branching out into more writing :) Nice character development, and great background stuff too! Good plot as well! Keep it up (and looking forward to the piccys to go with too!)

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calum5

5:26PM | Fri, 16 January 2004

Groovy story Robin,I think she done it all right!For being with the player has rubbed off and I dont think she is so innocent anymore,on the other hand~lol!Now there's a grip and I need to know!:-)P.s yes do a book!Hugs byeeeeeeee calum

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SophiaDeer

6:52PM | Fri, 16 January 2004

Excellent work Robin! You make the reader wish for more!

jeweldragon

8:45PM | Fri, 16 January 2004

i love your story telling ! wonderful writing you are REALLY talented ! im awfully impressed by this wish i could do that lol

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flashone

10:40PM | Fri, 16 January 2004

Yah baby! I smell pulp novel here. Sure would love to "illustrate" this one. You rock, HC.

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jwdell

10:46PM | Fri, 16 January 2004

fascinating story, I'm hooked...

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Primal

11:02PM | Fri, 16 January 2004

a book would be so cool,with your art and this fantastic writing,its bound to be a hit..the story realy does make you want more..

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jherrith

12:06AM | Sat, 17 January 2004

Well, what an excellent beginning to a tale that can only be told one piece at a time. Great start and one can se some beautiful renders coming out of this storyline like the stars that adorn the night sky.

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