I Wonder by naria
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Something new I'm working on...I think it may need a couple more lines at the end of the first stanza...or maybe a middle stanza...comments/suggestions always welcome...:-)
I wonder what it would be like
To know you
To belong to you
To live
Knowing you are there
Loving me
Forever by my side
Till death
But even in eternity
Our souls would bind
I wonder
Comments (5)
naria
Maybe if i remove the last 2 lines in the first stanza. I think it flows better.
Nicholette
Really good poem, but maybe you're right, but I still think it's good!
tjames
Needs a graphic...got anything in mind?
enax
I like it as it is. Well done.
vaggabondd
Very nice work. I really like your style. it reminds me of ahhh it reminds me of me lol. great stuff my friend :)