Ecstacy's Dance by Blush

Writers • Romance • posted on Feb 18, 2004

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At night I lay as senusal thoughts surround me where moonlight plays and magic gathers round me enchanting me... Setting me free As I slowly drift away with thoughts of sinful pleasure wild,wondrous, wicked wants all locked up in this blissful treasure~ My mind wanders a lust,I wish to fufill Wants and needs I can't control I wait for you... Burn for you With all my heart and soul~ Enchanted Wanton ways... Unable to resist these passions rising In my pounding heart~ To the floor we both did fall in desire's sweet embrace We kissed and held each other Our hearts began to race~ Nights velvet cloak surrounds us... and darkness cast its spell we kissed and held each other In passions endless well~ We forgot all about time reality forgotten As our bodies danced with fever and wanton abandonment~ Pure magic Embraced in Ecstasy Desire raged our souls flamed with love~ We lay drenched Our passions now sated as we finished the dance of Ecstasy in loves embrace~

Comments (27)

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Bothellite

4:03AM | Wed, 18 February 2004

Oh my! Yes, magically putting the reader in the mood. And do you know that you can read it in reverse? Back and forth. Tantalizing.

vjerana

9:56AM | Wed, 18 February 2004

Thanks! It is a magic poem...Excellent, my dear!!!V!

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Elfenone

10:23AM | Wed, 18 February 2004

Beautifully written.. I love your use of language and your simplicity. It's a breath of fresh air to see something so beautifully woven with the simplest of threads. Bravo.

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naria

10:37AM | Wed, 18 February 2004

Beautiful and passionate. Excellent Job!

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WhispersSoft

4:55PM | Wed, 18 February 2004

very nicely done....looking forward to seeing more ur work...one can be swept by the moment

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romanceworks

1:40AM | Thu, 19 February 2004

You weave a romantic, seductive, passionate spell in your lovers web of desires. Beautiful. :o) CC

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Shadane

2:47AM | Thu, 19 February 2004

the ties that bind us together are the bonds of sisters: hug you are getting better and better at the mastery of words my friend

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qmont

7:11AM | Thu, 19 February 2004

Susan, this is the best yet, just fantastic words, in a very sensuous and mind enhancing trip through a very special meeting between two people........Execellent Job...........John

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ObsidianLogic

1:10PM | Thu, 19 February 2004

I agree with bothe (( only you would of bothered reading it boath ways Tom...whitch of course made me try it!! )) it is a wonderful turn of phrase . been there ::nodnod::

cynlee

3:33PM | Thu, 19 February 2004

got my passion reved up :D... beautiful woven words... cool... it does work... reading it backwards... great work dear one :]

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madame

10:34AM | Fri, 20 February 2004

Oh Susan, this is a magnificent poem... You have a big mastery of the writing, I admire you because it is something which I don't know how to make :) Bravo Susan !

sparky123

10:40AM | Sat, 21 February 2004

Now thats what I call passionate prose!!

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B_PEACOCK

10:30AM | Mon, 23 February 2004

WOW that is very cool :)

mad-mick

1:58AM | Wed, 25 February 2004

You are a gifted poet,this is a truely great poem

Dinalt

3:07AM | Wed, 25 February 2004

Very sensual piece - romance & passion perfectly described in verse.

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DennisReed

11:26AM | Wed, 25 February 2004

Poetry with passion! So moving, I'm even sweating! Bravo!

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violet

6:39AM | Thu, 26 February 2004

Beautiful passionat words !!!

roadrunner69

11:44PM | Sat, 03 April 2004

Superb poem! .... Now, can you write one titled 'Cold Shower?' .... wink!

Jalen

2:11PM | Tue, 11 May 2004

wow ..again i immed was drawn in by your first sentence..as I became the woman in this dance ..why it hurts so much is cause i first felt that with Mike..my ex fiance and best friend...in my heart he will always be my soulmate..we first met on here and he was in another country...thruogh life obstacles we finely met face to face and the love was even deeoer..unfort life stole him from me yet again ..in a way we will never be husband and wife..but Im thankfeul abd gr8t ful for his committment to care for me...God Bless..Laura:((((

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davidoblad

9:07PM | Fri, 14 May 2004

Excellent poem Susan. Very, very talented. (I checked your homepage, Your cute too (blush,blush). I'll keep tabs on your art. :^>

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meico

9:01AM | Sat, 15 May 2004

A lovely lyrical piece of restrained eroticism - sensual, but very subtle.

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Andromeda31

8:34PM | Mon, 07 June 2004

Very passionate poem...from the heart no doubt!!! :)

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Ona

4:29PM | Wed, 30 June 2004

Being a foreign language for me I was a afraid of your poetry. But I accidently started with this one and - I must be a stone if I'd stay cool after reading this overwhelming passion!
Blushes

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katili

8:21AM | Sun, 04 July 2004

Hidden fire ! This was very full of passion. Very good.

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wizardofnoz

1:32AM | Thu, 05 August 2004

Ur poem so beautifully written also reveals so much. The blissful satiation in the end is a lovely ripple in the memory but the journey began wth the struggle between, what u dont want to do and yet want to do. Thanx, for ur honesty and expression.

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avalonfaayre

2:13PM | Mon, 27 September 2004

Whoah! I remember this, too. I was in love a couple of times. Thanks for the memory!

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magnus073

10:06PM | Sat, 01 May 2010

Susan you are so talented Sweety and this one is so beautifully written and moving. I read it through twice and will come back to do so again. What a wonderful first post in the gallery.