The Chronicles of Rullious - Part 2 (Redone) by Calseeor
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This is a second attempt at page 2. I took advice from newave654321 (Thank You!) and hope that the image is a bit better now. I have found a new way to make the word bubbles (still have not mastered it) but I am getting better. Please let me know what you think.
Comments and tips always welcomed,
Thanks for looking,
--Eryk
Comments (6)
Counterboy
This is great, definately better, but I want to see Part 3! And 4! And 5!
runeseeker
Lookin good Eryk, I can see much more of the scenes now
GabrielK
LOL poor mage, he's just an errand boy to get food! And yeah he really should have paid more attention in class. :) I like the fizzling spell effect too!
HobbyHopper
Great job on everything, I especially like the tortoise. Excellent from me.
RaysOfLight
heheh i liked the first version more because the text was a bit more legible (can still read, but it's pretty small writing on my screen :) heheh i like the text highlighting though and the story is cool! i wonder what happens next :)
paintgirl
Great job. Very funny. I little more light maybe but over all a good job. Your Ballons need help and are easy to make in Illustrator or another program that uses paths.. They need to be regular shaped as in a smoth curve. Also a size 10 font is best for the text. I work in comics so I know .. hee hee.. Keep it up.