Love Lost by Jalen
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This is a poem that I had to edit to reflect the way my life is now...I made this in Ulead Cool 3D..i havent had much to choose from in graphics in this program, but I felt that the double swords thru the heart would be self explanatory..n i added the anchor because im stagnant and very heavy with sorrow
Comments and suggestions are welcomed...
God Bless you all!
Love Lost
Love continually slips away...
Leaving me with an empty soul...
Like plaque does to the teeth
it slowly yellows and decays...
Until there is nothing left
but a huge gaping hole...
I'm very open at the very start...
As time passes the openness
fades and we both tend to forget...
I tend too soon to let my guard down
and I let them into my life and heart...
Left with my heart shattered in pieces
with overwhelming sadness and regret...
It seems like a lifetime before
the heaviness lifts and I heal...
I must allow my feelings to go
thru grieving, working it out...
Reaching the ability to accept
that its over and again feel...
Closing the dor to all the anger
sadness and the self doubt...
Love has slipped away yet again
trying to act like I don't care...
Knowing I'd have to endure many
toads before I find my prince...
I found my prince and lost him
to try again, I just won't dare...
To be sure I'm padlocking my fence...
The one I took the time to ensure
noone will enter, strongly I built...
Seeing you it all came tumblin down...
Restoring the trust instantly and I
so readliy dismissed all your guilt...
You were unfaithful once again and now
am left with the pain and unending frowns...
Comments (8)
atom80
Excellent piece. Meaningful but clear. I enjoyed Please continue to share your works!
Ladyhawk
Beautifull Jalen, I just wish it wasn't you going through all that pain,it will come again,besure there is someone even for you & all your doubt,& they will except you just as you are, if it comes form your heart Jalen it wonderfull know matter what any of us think, so stop doubting yourself I know it's hard , but think about what you can do,look at the beauty in these words,& your other pomes to, they touch us all in some way we have all lost a love ,it's the letting go like you said that is the hardest part,beautifull, just beautifully done
Fogge
Your poems are filled with feelings. You are a fantastic poet.. Thanks for sharing.
roadrunner69
Jalen .... hello .... wonderful, once again .... if I may be so 'presumptuous' .... "Tis better to have loved and lost - then to have 'never' loved" .... and, as I said to someone else here in a posting, "You always have you" .... no one can take that away from you - but you! .... re-read my 'country life' poem.... take care .... brian.
pscott
Wonderful poem. Very moving and well written. And honest ... an essential quality for good poetry. Well done.
Jalen
wow ty all for ur awesome comments ..i'm happ that it impacted all of you in some way...its really wild how my poetry is written..it just flows out of me and somettimes I will stumble across one i wrote n didnt even remember doing..its a gift and very theraputic as well..God Bless...And I promise I will keep sharing them even if i dont get 1 comment..because i have discovered that al though some posts have hundreds its rare to c more than 30 comments ...Jalen
rockclimber2003
hey great way to show love is lost in the fog.
___Mike_____
Very well said....:|:|:|