Friends In The Fire (WIP) by rdf
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Description
Hi all. It's been a very long time since I uploaded anything. Been too busy with the important stuff of life, I guess. Anyway, this is a work in progress and I need some advice. At least at this stage I refuse to be sensitive to criticism. I want it. Lots of it. On composition, user of colors and light, suggestions for postwork, etc., etc.
I'm very serious about this. Blast away. This is very important as this may ultimately be a gift to a "horse lover" friend of mine in the form of a large injet or similar print, and I want it to be as fine as my limited ability can get it. So if you ever wanted to dish out some serious criticism but held back for fear someone's feelings would get hurt, this is your chance.
Credits: from DAZ, Millenium Horse, Eagle, Cyclorama; from romanceworks, Ultimate Fire; composed in Poser 5; rendered in Vue 4.
Thanks for looking.
Comments (3)
rdf
Oh yeah, I almost forgot: this image, "Friends In The Fire," is Copyright (c) 2004, by Richard D. Farley, All Rights Reserved.
svdl
I'd suggest blurring the hindquarters of the horse gradually, so that it matches the "out of focus" effect of the plants. Maybe sharpen those plants a little. The crisp and clear eagle stands out very well against the background, keep that! The dynamics on the horse are just excellent.
Hope these comments are somehow useful, I think you've got a great thing going here!
Fogge
This looks amazing.. I love the composition and colors.. Excellent work!