Taken For Granted by FlutterbyeJo
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Description
A feeling of insurmountable free will,
the thought that in the silence of your head you are untouchable, impregnable.
An emotion that you grow to love but is often hard to find.
No longer trapped in the endless drone of a thousand thoughts and electric mis-sparks of your brain,
but free to reign,
as you please,
The everlasting essence of life coiled around pillar,
like snake around tree,
waiting to deceive, trick and blame.
Comments (2)
meico
Though I have some reservations about your line-break pattern [IMO some lines are too long] the language and underlying rhythm are strong enough to carry the theme of the poem successfully.
pscott
Very nice rhythym and flow. It's well written and was an enjoyable read. Very well done.