Out of Me by FlutterbyeJo
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Description
The need to delete, get rid and rubbish,
the only way through...
endless waves of tiring scorn.
Felt through barriers,
still not protected.
Will there be a day of forever release?
No light to show me or blind the inevitable.
Infinite tunnels of restless condition,
insomnia's cure is to far,
can't sleep.
Comments (3)
meico
The emotion is evident and carefully controlled in this compact, though pithy, little piece. Most interesting.
pscott
Another wonderful piece and does indeed work with shorter lines. Your distinctive voice is heard through the words and flow and holds the readers attention. I look forward to reading more of your work.
airlynx
I have days when I feel like that (a lot of them) and I think you captured the mood quite well.