The All-Seeing Eye by summer1412
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((I wrote this about a month ago, and I made the image before...just messing around in PSP...so I guess in inspired a half-assed poem, LOL! Oh well, the result isn't SO bad... Thanks for looking, comments welcome))
The leaves are turning,
The cold is burning,
There are storm clouds in the sky.
Lighting is flashing,
My soul is thrashing
Under the all-seeing eye...
Always peering,
Continuously leering,
Laughing whenever you cry.
Never embrace,
Have fear when you face
The all-seeing eye...
Never done using,
Always confusing,
Only blinks before you die.
Never looking back,
Always keeping track,
The all-seeing eye...
Creator of sins,
Your torture within,
The door to your heart it pries.
It opens you wide,
Scans your insides,
The all-seeing eye...
After you're known,
From your flesh to your bone,
It tosses you aside.
Always searching,
Always lurking,
The all-seeing eye...
Comments (7)
roadrunner69
Summer .... hello, young lady .... great art work for this piece .... superb written work .... I hope your eyes see 'good' more than not .... if not, maybe it's time to look elsewhere? .... take care .... now, go have some 'fun'!
visualgirl
Awesome written work and image! The poem has a good rhythm. Hugz, Melissa
airlynx
Agreez w/ visualgirl, great rhythm
drugdoc
Wow! while the pic is cool, the poem is mind blowing!!! :-)
i-popba
Seeing Eye is so cool......!!!
meico
Wonderfully fluid rhythms and good solid rhyme scheme combine extremely well.
Jalen
gr8 message and desciptive...L:0)