Drops of Love by Blush

Writers • Landscape • posted on Jun 18, 2004

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She moves about the garden Like a feather in the wind Borne by a gentle breeze Admiring her kin~ Drops of love fall from her eyes And despair fills her heart For she know what they do not The time has come to part~ All her life she has sustained them Giving birth to everyone Each petal mirrored perfection And radiance from the sun~ With mission here now found complete The heavens open wide Overcome...she breathes one last breath Eternally abide~ Awakened by the warmth of morn Their loss is felt with sorrow Glistening now the drops she shed Comforting memories for the morrow~

Comments (27)

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romanceworks

10:39PM | Fri, 18 June 2004

A very touching poem and lovely image. Your words always paint such a poignant picture. "Drops of love fall from her eyes". Lovely work. :o) CC

susanmoses

10:41PM | Fri, 18 June 2004

Eloquent words Susan... letting go is so hard... that's what I get from this... permanence is of another world I suppose... :]

vjerana

10:43PM | Fri, 18 June 2004

Wonderful poem, my dear! Excellent done V!!!

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Hyria

11:54PM | Fri, 18 June 2004

A truly felt poem. Wonderful words.

sheilakalajdzic

12:58AM | Sat, 19 June 2004

beautiful words that touch my heart.

roadrunner69

2:56AM | Sat, 19 June 2004

Superb written work! .... VOTE

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meico

3:17AM | Sat, 19 June 2004

There is a tenderness which suffuses the whole poem which lifts and enlivens the general air of melancholy and gives it beauty. I admire the quiet dignity in the acceptance of that which we cannot change ... it is not a surrender, but an embrace. V

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kenwas

4:35AM | Sat, 19 June 2004

The writing, the scene, wonderful combination. Vote!

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Bothellite

8:52AM | Sat, 19 June 2004

This struck me so hard... It's like I'd read it before I'd finished the half-way point. The fifth verse is superb. Thank you.

wildfire2003

2:13PM | Sat, 19 June 2004

Such a touching and loving poem Susan. I guees that once a mother's job is done and it is time to go there is left a sweetness and a sorrow. Beautifully written!

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DennisReed

2:50PM | Sat, 19 June 2004

Moving poem and lovely supporting image! Bravo Susan!

RobertTheoret

3:21PM | Sat, 19 June 2004

Extremely well written, and full of emotion. I just adore you poetry. "HUGZ" to you Susan BRAVOS!!!

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qmont

6:16PM | Sat, 19 June 2004

Susan, Wow by far your best yet, and the stunning image to go with it. Your words are so touching, and you write them with the skill of a Master, i am so moved my dear friend everytime I read your works, Susan thank you for sharing..Hugs John

ann0314

10:19PM | Sat, 19 June 2004

Very tender and touching...you have an EXCELLENT WAY withe WORDS!!!! EXCELLENT!!!

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VictorianVelvet

11:14PM | Sat, 19 June 2004

so delicate and full of emotion ...truly :*o)

pscott

2:01AM | Sun, 20 June 2004

Wonderful poem! So warm and so very well written. This is truly a heart felt piece. Excellent work.

vlaaitje

3:48AM | Sun, 20 June 2004

very touching words...I like your poetry very much...words are very important...a poet can use them in the right way..I am a poet too, so I know how I must reach people in their hearts.....but sometimes words are painful too....it depends how you read it..... and in which mood you are...

cynlee

4:46PM | Sun, 20 June 2004

very touching... i feel it deeply... beautifuly written susan :]

Jalen

7:10PM | Sun, 20 June 2004

always love your poetry sweetie..and i so look forward to the eternity part..tired of all this hell...L:0)

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