Reality by BlueLotus7

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jul 26, 2004

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I have loved you from afar for what seems an eternity. You are my fantasy although real to others. My soul is bound by chains of morals. How long can this flame of love burn before being consumed by this isolated darkness called self-control? Constraint's talons are ripping the thin veil of my sanity until only a shadow remains. But I continue to smile from afar for what seems...an eternity... You are my fantasy although real to others.

Comments (42)

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prog

5:19PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Very beautiful words!!! I need to get out of the Poser gallery more often!! Excellent!!

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Turtle

5:29PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Excellent poem, Wonderful.

Pen_Is_Envy

5:39PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Tell me about it, this is just heartwrenching!! GREAT work!!

annemarie2

5:41PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Very beautiful!!

macrey18

5:55PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!

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PandyGirl

5:55PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

wow hun.. this is ...beautiful to say the least.... it just fills you when u read it..

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Avalonne

6:03PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Now THIS is some pretty amazing writing....truly beautiful words and very powerful emotions...Excellent!!!

kathymoon

6:29PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Beautiful words,very emotional,im glad you start posting,beautiful,huuugs!!!!!

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SpiritofGabriel

6:38PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Wow! I'm not suprised - I knew you were a fantastic writer. Truely beautiful words.

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NAngel1298

6:39PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Although it is drifing from your pen, It feels as though it lingers on your lips. That taste of desire, sweet, and frustration so bitter. Do not stay thy hand, but quench the thirsting of our parched imaginations, and let us dring deep, your emotions

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macelene

6:42PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Wonderful piece.

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Jedi_Padawan

6:54PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Wonderful words and I LOVE the last sentence!!! It's.....excellent. You definitely should write more! ~Saskia~

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calum5

7:09PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Oh wow how beautifull,as an artist whom has had the pleasure of your comments for some time I could actually imagine you wrote this for me!Lmao!!joke!!Really stunning words work!(Words work~lmao again~you can tell I dont visit the writters often!!)Well atleast I can have you on my faves and can enjoy something else from you too!!:-)))Bye calum vote!!

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SK2Design

7:15PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

This is an absolutely incredible poem! It possesses so much depth, power and emotion. I absolutely love it! Awesome prose and poetry!

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romanceworks

7:36PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

You are a wonderful writer. Your poem touches the heart in so many ways.Oh, that last line gave me a chill. So very glad your fantasy of posting your words is now a reality for all of us to enjoy. Bravo and a vote. :o) CC

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sirocco

7:39PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Lovely poem - words that express strong feelings, sweet longing, tender thoughts... It's wonderful!

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dragongurl

7:40PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

That's beautiful BlueLotus7! I can feel your longing and the torture of your soul in this piece. Wonderful!

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pjaj

7:55PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Absolutely beautiful poem here! Excellent!!!

Avengia

8:30PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

This is beautiful!! Thanks so much for pointing me to this sweetie! I would have hated to have missed it!! Very powerful!! HUGS ~Heather~

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SophiaDeer

8:42PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Beautiful, moving and powerful poetry!! Brava!!

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babydollTX

9:43PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Having lived through a three year long distance relationship, I can feel the exquisite pain behind the words. Thank you for sharing this beautifully crafted poem.

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IgnisSerpentus

10:24PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Fab writing hun.. I havent written anything in soooo long... not one of my strengths i suppose, like art. But you, youre a terrific talent. I love how writers paint pictures with words....

ann0314

11:41PM | Mon, 26 July 2004

Just BEAUTIFUL...you are such a talented writer :O)I read this earlier but wanted to wait till I had some time to comment :O) ... JUST A FANTASTIC EXAMPLE of YOUR LIMITLESS TALENTS!!! EXCELLENT SWEETIE :O) Thanks for telling me about it..it was just a BEAUTIFUL read :O) EXCELLENT!!! VOTE!!!

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