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Drache

Writers Romance posted on Jul 31, 2004
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This is a poem I wrote when I was a Junior in High School back in 1989, so bear with me: Drache Upon a mountain I found a dragon With beautiful scales Reflecting the sky Its kind and generous eyes Did not notice me. I thought to myself: "This was worth the climb" It was so graceful- The batting of its eyes The movement of its limbs. I was in awe. "Are you 'Love?'" I finally asked. Its eyes looked upon me, Beckoning... Possessing me. I was enthralled. "This was worth the wait." It sighed gently, Looked tenderly at me; As though, I were a fragile child... Naive. "Yes." Its voice, was a powerful chiming of bells, "Do you want me?" It smiled. I could not breath. Its voice seduced me. "Yes."- I whispered. The word echoed in my head. "Then accept my yoke." Its neck arched Its head bowed I embraced its flame And became a cinder.

Comments (8)


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jocko500

7:39PM | Sat, 31 July 2004

I would have given you a "A" if I was the teacher

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summer1412

10:17PM | Sat, 31 July 2004

Met...I'm totally blown away, this is amazing! The detail, the scene, so visual!! O.O Keep writing, you're very, very talented!

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BlueLotus7

7:57AM | Sun, 01 August 2004

Ah...the all consuming fire of Love! Wonderfully rendered in words! Awesome insight for the age you were!! High School? 1989? OMG! NOW I feel old!!! LOL I grad. HS in 1970! ;)

roadrunner69

12:47PM | Mon, 02 August 2004

"Like a moth to the flame?" .... lol .... superb piece! .... for the record, I trump BlueLotus7 - 1969! .... WINK!

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lionking123

8:25AM | Wed, 04 August 2004

:)) no comment :))

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Hyria

8:43AM | Wed, 11 August 2004

Wonderfull verse. Very image invoking :)

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idiot_sphinx

10:08PM | Sat, 14 August 2004

Bravo!!! For as young as you were ,this is very sensitive and I can tell it holds a lot of meaning for you :D Excellent !!

RobinBanks

2:10AM | Wed, 29 December 2004

Very lovely prose,Quite a moral told in getting more than you bargained for when you wish for more than is your wont. A dragon.... a love to great to bear.. poof.. quite wonderfull.


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