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Dark Flight

Writers Horror posted on Aug 07, 2004
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Beneath the Dark Moon's shadow Dead leaves rise and whirl Through forests primeval Bony branches clatter warnings By winds from all directions Chasing down a long forgotten path Overgrown and darkly haunted Follow if courage does not flee In the faces of Desire and Despair For here is where they dwell with her Their Queen of the Vmpyr, Bride to The Lord of Death, Prince of Jinn Universally serving unto the Alpha They are the Omega, the Shadow equal Bred to deal the final blow to all Who dare reject their Source of Life And so Death comes to souls condemned Never more to play upon the worlds Created for their delighted senses Dark Angels serving Lords of Light They too must obey or meet demise As countless other races amid the stars Come dance with Death and his Bride As they contemplate the future For promised they by the Lords A feast of souls from Man... And with each soul their life extends The food chain must continue... So if you care about your eternity Learn you must the rules laid down Upon Shumer in the beginning For each of you is a dish in waiting To serve or be served--the choice is yours Did you believe that you were special? Did you believe that you would be absolved? Did you believe all taught by clergy bold? For shame! You should have read your history And laid claim to Truth and Reality Perhaps it is not too late for you-- Search out your own true blood For doors are closing that once stood open Yet Time is forever convoluting And very soon the Makers come Claiming the world to make anew Will you serve the Lords of Light Or will you feed the hungry? Copyright 1996, Apr. 8th

Comments (14)


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meico

9:13AM | Sat, 07 August 2004

In a poem such as this which contains certain narrative and philosophical elements it is all too easy to be seduced away from the poetic voice into quasi-prosaic forms - you have avoided this tempation superbly and written a piece with a deal of elegance and finesse. I would not normally seek to read works in this genre, and in addition to admiring the technique [which did not surprise me] I am delighted to report I enjoyed it thoroughly, too! vote

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clbsmiley

9:34AM | Sat, 07 August 2004

Intriguing.

roadrunner69

9:56AM | Sat, 07 August 2004

I really like all your previous works, and this one, very much .... cannot wait to see your newer stuff also .... VOTE

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katili

10:19AM | Sat, 07 August 2004

Wau ! Really impressing . V

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PandyGirl

10:45AM | Sat, 07 August 2004

very nice. and girl just publish these in a book.. you really should ! hugs

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Avalonne

3:53PM | Sat, 07 August 2004

Lordy, you do Goth every bit as well as Romance....this is fantastic writing!

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SpiritofGabriel

8:11PM | Sat, 07 August 2004

I have read this several times now and absorb just a little more. Could take a person on a journey if you let it! Watch your words my dear - you will have us all bewitched! LOL!

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SophiaDeer

10:32PM | Sat, 07 August 2004

Words from the heart...passion..emotions...brava!!

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SK2Design

6:25PM | Sun, 08 August 2004

This is so awesome! I just love the way your words plunge the reader into the world of darkness and all who dwell there. Which decision to make? To give into them, or face death... Brilliant poem!

annemarie2

12:03PM | Mon, 09 August 2004

Fantastic Job!!! I love it!

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Metonicus

4:14PM | Mon, 09 August 2004

Ooh, I like this one alot.

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pjaj

10:56PM | Mon, 09 August 2004

Excellent work as always! Beautiful!!

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romanceworks

1:52AM | Wed, 11 August 2004

Wow, very powerful writing. CC

efry_e

6:15PM | Thu, 09 September 2004

Indeed , very powerful, and I'm crazy about it. Your mind and your soul create all this marvolous works that leave me speechless as I see my reflection in them.


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