In Common by BlueLotus7
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So this is good-bye...
An eternity of laughter and heartache
words cannot describe
what we have grown to
mean to each other
although I have tried
to write from my heart
we must go our separate ways
...so you tell me
and I will accept your word
...recall mine
Perhaps in some future
on a snowy winter's night
our eyes will meet
on Boston Common
and the fire will ignite
melting the snowflakes
falling between us...
Comments (12)
SophiaDeer
Such words of emotion and beauty!!
meico
A very moving and delightfully written account of a ... ? farewell. The inclusion of future possibilties gives the poignancy of the piece a distinct upward twist. v
pjaj
Excellent writing here!! Beautifully said:o)
katili
Sadly but sweetly accepting the goodbye. You write so touching about this. I can feel the emotion in this. And the hope in the end is beautiful. V
SK2Design
Brilliant piece! The way you've used a short poem but have been able to convey so much emotion is absolutely awesome. An excellent use words!
Avalonne
You really do convey some really powerful thoughts and emotions with very few, but very well chosen words....you paint a picture with your writing...I love it all!!
roadrunner69
I liked this piece a great deal because it deals with what most have dealt with at some time .... it also states how 'torn' someone is with saying 'goodbye' forever and still leaving the 'possibility' of a future somehow that most probably will never occur .... I think 'death' is easier to 'handle' than 'separation' at times, imho? .... superb work!!
annemarie2
This is a wonderful -- I agree with what everyone has said here. Your writing is truly exceptional.
SpiritofGabriel
I have learned the hard way, as you, that just because your soul mates it doesn't mean you have to be together, by law or any other way to still be friends. XOXOX
dragongurl
This is a very sad piece for me. It has brought out some painful memories I've tried to suppress for some time now...but it is beautiful, how you've captured every emotion and thought...
romanceworks
A sad and very beautiful farewell. Excellent writing. :o) CC
Blush
Nostalgic and wistful memories this evokes Wonderful imagery I just posted a poem, hope you drop by too see me Nice to meet ya I agree with CC a beautiful farewell Susan~