To Be As She by naria
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Still working on "Forsaken" and making significant progress...thanks to everyone for your input. However, i just got inspired today and had to put this one out...
It is an hour of darkness.
Of blood;
A song of dark desire,
Wolves vent their cry.
The wind howls,
And the dark one stirs.
Curling wisps of death
Shroud her brooding form.
A timeless life.
Her raven hair cascades over
Pale and tragic shoulders.
And her full crimson lips part slightly,
To taste the red tears streaming
From the pale flesh beneath her.
Now a night of ecstasy,
Compelled by her call;
I awaken
Comments (7)
redbeard
Very dark but excellent poem. Love the imagery!
meico
A compact and intense little poem ... made all the more effective by its brevity.
katili
Very good, brings out the dark atmosphere and the ecstasy of this old story. I have always felt great interest to the myth and stories of the sad ageless souls with their enormous passion and loneliness.
BlueLotus7
Excellent images evoked by your words! The Eternal meets Emotion! Thank you!
roadrunner69
Well done work!! ... excellent!
midnightblue
The mood and the imagery is astounding. Excellent!
Jalen
wow u never ceasee to amaze me ur depth of emtions in such a young soul..but u touch all who rads ur writings..ur a blessing to me and i thnk God everyday for ur presence in my life..Love ya Mandy!