Utopia by Matrus

Writers • Abstract • posted on Oct 01, 2004

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This world can shine So green and blue Hard to define And still so true So densely packed With brightest beams Hard to inspect If it just seems? With graceful smells And sounds of life The soft wind dwells When thoughts arrive All things get clear In mindful flows No need for fear When beauty grows Then sights are pure The breathe is slow In liquid cure A smile can glow

Comments (4)

netsia

5:45PM | Fri, 01 October 2004

I was having a Ray Charles moment after reading this. :) Excellent

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cagewench

10:17PM | Fri, 01 October 2004

fav line: "In liquid cure A smile can glow" was a little leery on the line: "With graceful smells" since I can't think of a single smell I can equate with the term "graceful". Good work though :)

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TallPockets

11:26PM | Fri, 01 October 2004

Beautifully written.

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Blush

12:37AM | Sat, 02 October 2004

A beautifully written poem One of my first reads of yours will be back for more and nice to meet you as well I just posted a new poem tonight also do hope you drop by and see me Vote Susan~