I Would Love To Hold You In My Hand(beta version) by gallimel
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I'd love to hold you
within my hand,
like a lightening ball,
like the preciousness
you've got
could save me from the
nightmares I fight with
everyday, right from then...
I'd love to hold you,
within my hand,
within my skin...
for all the things you say
When I find you within my dreams,
for all the things you make
that wake me up in thrill...
Oh, I'd love to have you...
here,
standing and facing me,
to never let you go
away,
till within my hand
you could name all
the sweetest thoughts
your challengin soul can paint.
I have no escape,
I'd love to make you mine...
I surely don't know
how could I make you mine...
from your skin I follow
God's scents,
all Devil's tricks
I solve and drain
and that divine dream of love,
I would so love to have
suddenly makes me stone,
and suddenly dusts me away...
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Photoshop7, 2 hours work, from pictures available at my site in "Meli's Camera Art" section,here and here.
The blonde girl in this work is ANNALISA, not me, the "ghost" is MORENA ;) and the dancers are Elli's dance group of Parabita.
The Alpha version you all have seen when I was thinkin Rik was dead is seable too here and it was Photoshop 7, 30 minutes work, from this syndroyd 's image :)
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This 7th poem is a bit different from usual. I wrote it still in 1998, but it was not a poem relate to me in complete way...
it was more an excercise in verses about the discovering of love feelings, with eyes of both genders involved.The feeling of possession and the one of fear the discover brings, along with the shaking and devotion to the obsessive idea of the one you consider your personal godsent.
The Alpha version of the image was actually very liked by me.. but after the turmoil of syndroid's death fake news, I thought he for first will love to see another image under this poem :)
Don't worry dear, you're already star of Poems 13 "Your rage", which I prepared a beta version for already,too.You're a perfect model and I will use you more and more again be sure of it :)
I have used a note of classical mythology that sees the three Parcas holding all the sphere of lightening energy that symbolizes the love feeling in my poem. Just for precising I didn't place them over a classic structure of architecture for nothing ;) and to fullfill your curiosity, in case you were actually interested in that particular.
Enjoy you all! :)
Comments (123)
Sekadhar
Oh Meli, Meli! So beautiful and romantic! WOW! Excellent image and poem! Bravo:)!!!
vlaaitje
welcome back lovely artwork, wonderful soft colors...I like it very much..and of course your words...
jstsittinghere
welcome back Meli! gorgeous image to your powerful words:)
Merlin2000
FANTASTICEXCELLENT AND VOTE***
gunsan
This is one of my favs of your compositions of image and poem, love the balanced image, and your poems always make their way right to my heart.
adm5050
A beautiful piece of art ma'am!!
thesymphonyofthelife
Hi Meli, it's an excellent illustration i like the colors and the tones used. The idea and the work are very good. have a good day
killahsin
nice textures and text...welcome back and have a nice day = )
gwfa
very nice composition (although I found the blurred fonts hard to read...)
JNH
I like the poem and the artwork! The architecture inspires a sense of deja vu.
mauriziomalangone
Perfect combination of two artistic style. Excellent.Power and perfection. I feel this.
melevos
Wonderful artwork!!
Fractelaar
Orginal illustration Cool poster :-) Great job so as usual
Tore13
bel poster
Synapse
Firstly I love the overall colour tint! Makes for a much more harmonious, homogenous work, making its elements feel "together" and part of the same composition. Some beautiful overlaying of Elli and her friends over the buildings. I would just say you need more practice in typography but you are improving: it just needs arranging so not a single word gets obscured by competing with background detail of similar tone. For the title text on the left I'd suggest reducing the space between each line which would make it easier for the text to avoid the yellow hair with only slight moving of the whole text. A lovely and warm work sweetie, and the poem is beautiful hugs :-)
Sylvaine
Stunning atmosphere and wonderful poem..just wonder what would be the final version..Thanks
efry_e
Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii :) . These poems wriiten by you appeal to me so much that I'm amazed. It sweeps me away.
crrunchyfrog
hugs I love this poem too angel and the accompanying image shows you are learning more about PS each time you use it. I love the depth in this one hugs Thank you so much for creating and sharing such beauty HUGS
BusyB967
Excellent
Imager
This is a very interesting piece. So happy to see another one from you! Love the poem, too. The person you wrote it for is very lucky!
1010
Beautiful composition. Excellent!
eres
Awesome work of art Meli!!! Your words allways touch my heart!!!!
Richardphotos
excellent poetry and a scene with so many things to take in and comprehend. as always Mel you are a talented person
Nambara
Very intense art and poem. Looks like come from t heart!!! An Excellent combo!!! Thankzzz for share!!
electric
congratulations, nice compose and excellent color selection too darkness, too myth. excellent
beatoangelico
Beautiful Job Of Composition Super Image Great Sight Super Compliments EXCELLENT JOB VOTE *BY
cockjuice
Your art comes from your heart directly. All the depth and imagery is like a projection of thought. It makes for a deep and meaningful piece. Welcome back hun.
Artzy
Wonderfully Done! Very Feelingful!
coolj001
Beautiful mix Meli. I love your poem too. At first I was thinking...."cool! Meli wants to hold me in her hand! yay :-) Oh well......I'm a dreamer. Please forgive the cruel actions of the individual who so much hurt you....don't hold a grudge(I assume you have already done this) Syndroid is fine, and so are you! Good to see you back. :-) (by the way...I have signed up for an Art class w/ a very good local Artist.....I like his watercolors..(the class consists of both watercolor, and drawing), and am sceduled to begin next week! :-) -Peace/Jeff
kansas
Excellent artwork and a touching poem.