Just over the horizon... by ednos
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Description
Nothing quite professional, but... it'll do. I would love to have as much negative criticism as possible, so I can figure out what I did wrong.
Comments (9)
fmtoffolo
mora grass layers. mountain looks solarized. that big sun is not that good looking. clouds have room for improvement. but i do like the snow, and if that water is suppossed tu be a river, you could increase "distort by terrain" to make it look as if it was moving.perhaps change the sun position, but that's up to you.
hillrunner
You can change the pov (this big mass of rock in left part is not so beautiful), reduce glowing around the sun, and work on surfaces (add some more sand and rocks layers), but you are on the way !
1pearl
very nice !
HeikoH
Agree with hillrunner! You may also try to divide snow and grass layers f.e. with different height settings. Go on with this! We want to see more from you. :-)
Dotthy
yes, maybe a bit soften the clouds.
tony_br22
greatlooking
stbc
Also, post images no bigger than about 1000 X 750 or so helps us view all at once for composition of image. Rarely, bigger is ok for special reasons.
ednos
alright, i made it smaller. how exactly does one soften clouds?
PatGoltz
I don't know that you did anything wrong. You simply need to develop the picture more. Put more layers in the surface, etc. Spend a lot of time looking at the better artists and figure out what they did, and do it. Art is as much about seeing as anything else.