Just over the horizon... (revised) by ednos
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Description
OK, I did the following:
- added and edited grass layers
- adjusted the snow's altitude (+min)
- changed the water, mostly Distort by Terrain
- smoothed the clouds (by changing them to 3D)
- changed the sun's size/position
is it better, or did I mess it up?
Comments (6)
fenixcats
Your almost there - try putting a strata to the mountain to help give it texture, this is much improved.
ednos
a what?
EoinArmstrong
Nice pov and colours - your grass layers need to be more varied in colour - I don't think strata (http://mywebpages.comcast.net/dataslave/TheWall/The_Wall.htm) would much improve this - they work better on smoother surfaces
T2
Realistic lightning and atmo!
sgroggle
IMHO there is too much shadow or the framing is bad, or both. Maybe you should change the position of the sun for getting no so much shadow, or (probably better) change the camera orientation a bit more to the right so that this blackish mountain takes less surface in the composition of the image. Try a less saturated color for the grass, even a yellower one. The sky is not very exciting. Try to generate new clouds. Good luck!
tony_br22
I love it .. inspiring expression you show here. coloring and point of view .. and the sky are wonderful