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Dorothy's Song (for my Mom)

Writers People posted on Nov 05, 2004
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I wrote this Wednesday night, while I was in the tub, from Torin's point-of-view and I had the minister read this at the funeral yesterday so when Torin is older I can tell him that though I chose to not have him attend the funeral, that I tried to capture his feelings about my Mom and have them shared...
BTW, this pic of Mom and Torin was taken by me on Sept 13th, 2004.
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Dorothy

Comments (18)


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squeeka

12:23PM | Fri, 05 November 2004

Simply beautiful... Torin will love reading this one day... hugz~jen :)

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Doodles

12:38PM | Fri, 05 November 2004

Beautiful and touching poem. I'm sure Torin will appreciate the poem and picture when he is older. It will help him remember her too.

fracturedmoon

4:00PM | Fri, 05 November 2004

wipes eyes This is so sweet and so very touching. It is a beautiful poem for both Grandma and Torin. Beautiful....

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TallPockets

4:04PM | Fri, 05 November 2004

"Grandma died, when I was two thats what my Momma said but I still feel, her kiss goodnight when I go to bed" -- Such a wonderful and thoughtful heart-felt written piece. Your son, and you, were lucky to have someone so very special. Memories of a lifetime. PEACE to you dear lady.

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AusPoet

4:05PM | Fri, 05 November 2004

Your mom must be so proud of you right now, seeing you being such a brilliant mother. This is such a sweet and touching tribute; I'm sure Torin will appreciate it a great deal. My thoughts have been with you Cara.

DarkGalaxy

8:36PM | Fri, 05 November 2004

It took me about 5 minutes to dry my eyes enough to write this compliment. It is a very beautiful, and poignant poem. Excellent and well done. Your mom must have be so proud of you.

bardobedlam

9:45PM | Fri, 05 November 2004

Beautiful expression of your's and torin's feelings. Well done.

Rooster

11:01PM | Fri, 05 November 2004

Cara - This is so beautiful, I've been thinking about u and hope you're doing alright. Trying times, I know. You're in our thoughts :)

netsia

8:50AM | Sat, 06 November 2004

Sweet picture and sweet words....take care.

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classyladytwo

1:10PM | Sat, 06 November 2004

Beautifully expressed one day Torin will know how wonderful of a Grandma she was and is still with him she is his special guardian angel how special this is ,certainly came from deep inside the heart wonderful Cara *V

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jwdell

8:12AM | Sun, 07 November 2004

Awesome!!!! vote

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Diago

2:40AM | Mon, 08 November 2004

I can share your feelings after events from this weekend in my own life. Very nice way to have him remember her, because in the end we realise to late that memories are all we have.

FlutterbyeJo

2:17PM | Thu, 11 November 2004

That is beautiful as I think is the general feeling, it bought a lump to my throat...take care hugs x x

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cagewench

4:16PM | Thu, 11 November 2004

thank you everyone

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Unicornst

9:01PM | Thu, 11 November 2004

Very touching poem that goes with a priceless picture. In the same catagory with others concerning the teary eyes and lump in throat.

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unchained

10:18PM | Mon, 15 November 2004

Very beautiful and loving poem. My condolences about your mother. This is such a wonderful way to remember her for Torin and you. V

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GladysClump

1:51AM | Sat, 20 November 2004

This is really beautiful Cara, I'm so sorry for your loss, I hope you are doing ok

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cagewench

8:56AM | Tue, 23 November 2004

thank you


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