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Description
A fantasy come true,
Wonder to view
Beauty stunning,
In blinding light.
A soft touch to the cheek ,
Cold as ice .
Sound of silence so peaceful ,
Yet you think twice.
Steam from lips,
The kiss of strife .
Soft steps ,
A dance on the edge of a knife.
For this soft silent cold partner,
Can easily take your life.
(D.M.Purnell November 15,2004 12:00 noon)
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Comments (10)
Bothellite
Thoughts constructed in such an unusual way -- I had to read twice to comprehend and it was extremely fun. Excellent!!
Akire
lovely flow and edge, your words spin wonders!
TallPockets
A 'wonder' ful piece. Vote.
Andi3d
I really must find more time to stop by, these days it's all work, work, work. I'm glad i have though, because, as always, your words have a superb depth. now wheres that vote button....
DennisReed
To bad you don't see me standing and applauding! Bravo!
romanceworks
I like your words a lot. Vote. :o) CC
chrislenn
you have a wonderful way with words that I envy and this piece is a perfect example of that Chris :o)
jadedjane
wow.... Thats fantastic. it seems to have such a wonderful rhythm and flow when it's read outloud, beautiful :o)
meico
Concise, with a cool cutting edge. Nicely written. V
tony_br22
Beautiful lyrics!