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Burning tears

Writers Atmosphere/Mood posted on Nov 18, 2004
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Was in bed and had to get up and write this down (and post it)... used a self-pic of my eye, added some colour to it and then made it "coloured foil" in paint shop to get the surreal effect I desired to go with this.
______________________________________________________________________________ Burning Tears
Burning tears within my eyes Shards of broken dreams I cry Heart of clay And soul of stone I walk my path I am alone
Tests and questions plague my mind I feel insane, I seem unkind Unfiltered Unfathomable Unreal Tarot cards I refuse to deal
Futures aligning on threads I can

Comments (9)


tvernuccio

12:03AM | Fri, 19 November 2004

both the image and poem are are so moving...feeling your pain in my gut!!! i sure can relate to this...boy can i relate! thanks for posting...sharing our pain with others...a way of reaching out. hang in! vote!

Lissa_lei

12:28AM | Fri, 19 November 2004

Agree with Shiela, a movin and pain filled poem, feelin is shared by many I guess. Please do not cry. Eccellent! V Lina

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cagewench

12:31AM | Fri, 19 November 2004

I was peeking in tvernuccio's gallery and Lina, I don't know if I didn't know you were Italian or if I did know but forgot but, though I don't speak the language at all, my birth mom's dad (my Grandpa Sangoi) is from Northern Italy.

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AusPoet

12:51AM | Fri, 19 November 2004

Cara, this is truly gut-wrenching stuff... I really feel for you at the moment and hope that at least the knowledge that there are people out here who care (even if we are kinda ineffectual), will be something to help carry you through these tough times. Peace to you.

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Diago

1:57AM | Fri, 19 November 2004

Your pain is felt and shared on so many levels. Sometimes we can be alone even when the whole world is around and people often miss the pain in your heart and minds. We often wear masks to hide this, but in art, poertry and writing our truth is revealed. Truly well written and heartfull. hugs

netsia

7:14AM | Fri, 19 November 2004

this is the time of the greatest learning....good stuff

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Doodles

8:45AM | Fri, 19 November 2004

Wow..your words clearly communicate your pain and anguish. I am sorry to hear you going through so much. Hang in there this too shall pass.

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TallPockets

11:57AM | Fri, 19 November 2004

Superb expressive work. Now, go give 'yourself' one BIG HUG!

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cagewench

9:06AM | Tue, 23 November 2004

self-hugz are good, so are hugz from my wee man and my hubby... I'm just glad I can write, if I couldn't I don't know how I'd be purging my pain -- by opening my veins? by drowning them in a bottle? shrug who knows


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Photograph Details
F Numberf/2.8
MakeCanon
ModelCanon PowerShot A70
Shutter Speed1/20
Focal Length5

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