unrest by cagewench
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Just wrote this one a few minutes ago and the pic is a self-portrait (from Sept) that I flipped to greyscale and then upped the contrast on to get the feel I wanted. Now I shall attempt to sleep without having a nightmare... Wish me luck
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overtaken in pain-staking silence without warning and no hint of violence
vision blurs and body aches there can be no mistake
demons of dreams claw into me sirens sing sleep from a mystic sea sucking me down into morbidity
no nights without dreaming no dreams lacking screaming my subconscious a tormented mess let me feel more and sleep less
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overtaken in pain-staking silence without warning and no hint of violence
vision blurs and body aches there can be no mistake
demons of dreams claw into me sirens sing sleep from a mystic sea sucking me down into morbidity
no nights without dreaming no dreams lacking screaming my subconscious a tormented mess let me feel more and sleep less
Comments (10)
Ensomniac
I was going to try to be poetic in my comment, but something tells me your'e not in the mood, but you may end up creating some of your best poety ever tonite. If you still can't sleep, WRITE!
Diago
I think I can relate to this more and more. Thank you. Your writings keep reminding me that I am not always alone and that others also go throught the same things, sometimes at the same time. hugs Good luck with that dreamless night.
EoinArmstrong
Great structure - scary mood! Hope you slept well!
AusPoet
Here's hoping you are now sleeping soundly and with some confidence. hug!
netsia
when a portal is torn open through love/grief there are many lessons
tony_br22
awesome expression here! .. lovely cagewench.
TallPockets
Superb work. The last line can stand alone. Vote. Good Luck btw.
SNVixen
Sometimes writing about these things helps us tackle them--I hear where you're coming from--
Asylumc3
Here's to wishing you a restful, uneventful sleep. I can understand how badly that can be needed :).V
cagewench
well, thanks for the well wishes but the whole sleeping thing is still an issue sigh I'm not sure what to do...