Bare by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Nov 27, 2004

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Description

The only thing that seems to fit with how I feel and what I am writing are pics of my eyes... *shrug*
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Bare
naked spread bare before you
my soul in all its facets boils and beauty marks darkness and light
my body scarred and tattooed stretched and marked unable to hide unable to meet your eyes
my personality cynical yet hopeful confident yet insecure paradoxical combinations of behaviours and emotions
One birth And now I

Comments (19)

Wolfspirit

4:36PM | Sat, 27 November 2004

I can understand those feelings except I have had many more births as much more death, although truly, this writing is raw, honest, beutiful, and brave and I can relateexcellent writing as self expression.

Lissa_lei

5:53PM | Sat, 27 November 2004

Your words arew very honest, you give of yourself, and I feel your pain, and your desire to know what is not able to answer. If I can comfort you I would, but I have the same feelin, and no answer. Eccclelnt, Lina

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cagewench

8:26PM | Sat, 27 November 2004

thank you all

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TallPockets

1:17AM | Sun, 28 November 2004

Excellent piece. Even this 'guy' gets it. Vote.

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eternalwytch1

5:25AM | Sun, 28 November 2004

Beautiful, raw, open. The heart and soul speak the most powerful words.

tony_br22

8:05AM | Sun, 28 November 2004

lovely .. gorgeous scene you made with this poem. Really makes mind-images for me.

netsia

9:21AM | Sun, 28 November 2004

always live in your world, never let them steal your soul

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cagewench

10:08AM | Sun, 28 November 2004

Danke TP :) __ eternalwytch1: thank you tony: thanks :) __ netsia: believe me, I don't want it stolen

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naria

3:46PM | Sun, 28 November 2004

Beautiful. To me this poem shows the beauty in what some may deem as imperfections. Your work is always so touching and it makes one think. Keep it up.

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cagewench

7:16PM | Sun, 28 November 2004

naria: this "Your work is always so touching and it makes one think." was a wonderful compliment :) Thank you!

Rooster

11:05PM | Sun, 28 November 2004

I agree with naria, my brain hurts after reading your work because I think so much about it ;) Beautifully written V

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Diago

11:46PM | Sun, 28 November 2004

Very well done girl. PLease message me or mail me regarding this poem, I have an awesome idea for an image I can use it in.

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cagewench

8:10AM | Mon, 29 November 2004

Thanks Rachel :) ____ Diago: I'll IM you

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Doodles

11:39AM | Mon, 29 November 2004

In my opinion, it's the one of the most powerful of your poems. I especially love these words "unable to hide unable to meet your eyes". This is such an amazing and moving piece, I am continully amazed at how well you express yourself.

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cagewench

11:41AM | Mon, 29 November 2004

Doodles: you're making me blush!!! Thank you :):):)

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meico

8:54AM | Wed, 01 December 2004

Beautifully written ... honest, but simultaneously poignant - I particularly liked the way you looked out as well as in. V

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cagewench

9:01AM | Wed, 01 December 2004

thank you :)

miserys_extacy

10:27PM | Tue, 07 December 2004

Oh, this is so honest and open, my favorite kind of writing. "my personality cynical yet hopeful confident yet insecure paradoxical combinations of behaviours and emotions" How I love this part!

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cagewench

6:48AM | Wed, 08 December 2004

thanks :) Hey, did you read some PLath yet?