The Equation of Life by Matrus
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Description
I tried out a new kind of rhyming-kind of structure, which should be obvious, though I'd like to know, if this kind of structure is aesthetic in any way or not at all.
(hope for comments)
All beginning and every end
End and begin and rise and fall,
Followed just as it was meant
In a slope by each and all.
No thing of all is meant to be
Beyond the time it needs to show.
How should there be variety
If there's no time for change to grow.
Among the change life can be found
Bound to common waves of power.
Our aims tell how far we mount.
Will we adapt or only cower?
When we can sort the truth from lies,
Cries from laughter and thoughts from fear,
Hear the wisdom that has no size
We'll understand and smile a tear.
Comments (1)
TallPockets
Excellent piece. Vote.