He Came by Wolfspirit

Writers • Romance • posted on Dec 04, 2004

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Plop, dribble, drabble, and drop Spatter fog Falling faster, faster the race Spitted, spatter a scurrying scatter Softer, softer, slows the spill Drizzle, dazzle, fizzle, and frazzle Tiny pebbles of liquid pop Clinging while singing sweet melodies Streaking downwards little tadpoles flow Creeping, and seeping into the ground below As if veins, or stems with thorns of a vine Blots and blobs, clots, and clogs Dark and dreary thick misty mist Skies of calm white, dull grey, black fright A meeting the greeting between day and night Green they bleed plant of need in desert dry He came Mother earth the wish, From a lover a kiss Of life Rain

Comments (10)

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cagewench

10:14PM | Sat, 04 December 2004

I loved the rythmn of this!

tolerancemewsic

4:37AM | Sun, 05 December 2004

Mother Earth, Strangely and odd I was reading Lucid Dreams, a book I highly recommend, and have been focusing intensley on this aspect of my character. Keep it coming. You inspire me

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TallPockets

5:37AM | Sun, 05 December 2004

Wonderfully written piece. Vote.

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meico

7:00AM | Sun, 05 December 2004

Melodic and full of innocent freshness ... in itself it is a beautifully refreshing piece of work. V

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Richardphotos

6:07PM | Sun, 05 December 2004

excellent writings and thought provoking-v

Wolfspirit

8:03PM | Sun, 05 December 2004

Thanks to all for your kind words, the sharing of your thoughtseach as if a tiny refreshing blessing of a rain drop. "Warm smiles and sincerest stern but not to stern hugs to all."

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experimental

10:21PM | Sun, 05 December 2004

I love the fact that rain is not a sad thing for you. Nothing should be a sad thing, especially when it's something from our great mother earth. I remember so much playing in the rain that it will never be a sad thing. Hugs to you, and keep writing.

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