Ki Dor by ObsidianLogic
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Chapter Two Finding the Rings
Suddenly the king was gone it was dawn in the dark forest. Myanna only hoped she could remember every thing the little king had said. She began gathering up her things to start for the highlands. She found a map and charm the little king had left for her by the fire. She whispered thanks to the wind knowing some how he heard. Then she headed out following route the king had marked on the map. By noon she was hot and tired from the up hill clime. She spent two more hours running and walking trying to get to the caves before nightfall. She succeeded but was exhausted when she got there. Thankfully the One High was surprisingly easy to find. She spotted him on a high ledge carrying several rabbits he had trapped. She followed him in to his cave unfortunatly he waited in ambush she almost got hit ,ducking she avoided his fist. She spent the next few hours dodging several more blows trying to convince him that insted of killing her he should go with her. Finally in desperation she yanked off her bracelet and shoved her left wrist in to his face.
Comments (16)
chrislenn
wip or not it is still excellent :o) and the lack of images means our imagination takes over which isn't always a bad thing lol Excellent so far Chris :o)
Andi3d
I'm getting hooked. And this is conjuring images in my head....would you object if I took a stab at doing a couple of images based on this sometime?
Elfenberry
I'm getting hooked to and I'm feeling an image coming on.
calum5
Terrific again,I really have absorbed myself into this!Its like the next part I need to know already!!lol!Your talent is evident throughout each part!Looking forward to dawn:-))bye calum
DennisReed
A wonderful and entertaining tale! Thanks,& Bravo!
antje
Wonderful! You really have talent! :o)
TallPockets
All I want for xmas is to someday be able to write as well as you. ~sigh~ Vote.
paragon5
Fantastic story! You have a way with words that envelope the reader's imagination!
kansas
Great reading. It is building to a climax.
Zacko
Excellent writing. Thank you again for the invitation, Im enjoying every minute of it :) Oooh, oh...im gonna check out chapter 3 now...YAY!!!
Elfenone
Beautiful condensed verson of what I'm sure will shape up to be an even more beautiful tale. I love where it's going and how you're composing it. Keep it coming.
meico
.... still compulsive reading! The pace has been maintained brilliantly.
Fatale
doesnt feel like a wip to me.. very nice work :)
Blush
I think the 2nd part is good as the first This is excellent hun Superb writing I am enjoying these reads Vote n hugs Susan~
Rykk
COOL! Now you've got me hooked - gonna read the nest chapter immediately. Thanks for an excellent story, so far!
romanceworks
Super story and writing. :o) CC