You, My Destroyed Friend... by miserys_extacy
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Description
Catch me,
I am falling,
Into you I sink too quickly,
Completely.
My inner self I keep a secret,
But when I slip,
I lose definition,
And into you I melt,.
Myself no longer a possession of my own
My thoughts run clearly through your mind.
Didn
Comments (5)
lostandconfuzed
you write of an experience everyone goes through. you read someone like a book, get to know everything about them, but let them know nothing about you. When they try, you run. Sometimes its easier that way. "I will dance so lightly in your palm,Yet I will never touch a single piece of skin." I really like that...your style of writing is something i wish to achieve someday.
tony_br22
superb done .. beautiful article you made
jocko500
cool writing
eternalwytch1
Beautiful....
Shadowmonkey
An interesting commentary of some ones sink into despair. Such a descriptive poem I can understand why it is one of your favourites. Perhaps maybe it could well be your own magic you have woven into the words you type. A wonderful poem ;0)