I'm blind and you're a mime by cagewench
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Description
something werid popped into my head and I started typing...
The pic is one of me taken in Oct 1996 doing my "evil clown face", I adjusted the contrast and (badly) colourized the background...
I'm blind and you're a mime
A relationship not many can understand a mute mime involved with someone blind
how can we communicate touch can only tell so much
I smell the makeup the mask you create with stage paint I taste the oil of your chartreuse lips lick the perspiration from your fingertips yet, there is so much I miss
I see your sightless eyes glow with love grow with understanding crinkle in the corners with confusion you refuse to speak because you know I cannot but I shall not blind myself for you
I feel the tremors of your flesh I know I am the one to love you the best If only you could speak or I could see that we were meant to be
I play with my own shadow and dance with inner demons you cannot see the moods I paint upon my face love, lust, terror, horror fear, innocence, evil you cannot see how this will end but I do
I hear heavy breathing I feel the sheets being drawn away my flesh errupts with goosebumps I could have sworn I heard a metal on metal sound I reach for you and encounter death
Comments (23)
eternalwytch1
Dark, erotic. I like this piece very much hun.
xxxander
wow very dark...beautiful...and very deep! I LOVE it!!
cagewench
thanks you two, I have no idea where it came from this time ;)
TallPockets
Wow, I loved it until the 'death' part. What a way to go, though? WINK. Vote Write on, please.
cagewench
the death part was rather unexpected, but it's how it was meant to be written ;)
meico
Suspenseful and entertaining eroticism. Yep. V
ann0314
OK just WOOOOOOOOOOOW sweetie...that's all I can say...I am somewhat speachless..it's metaphorical for so many things I am just floored AWESOME!!!! HUGE VOTE
tony_br22
splendid writing you made .. lovely
cagewench
blush thanks :) This is being better recieved than I thought it might :)
SJMonkey
interesting! I like your exploration of relationships and the sences. I like the suprise ending too.
cagewench
hey sara baby!!!!
gknapp
macabre!!
cagewench
:):):)
Ensomniac
Look at you!! I knew this would be hot when I saw your picture, and title, damn. Your'e smokin girl! Great job! You're more mysterious every day.
cagewench
LOL... I was hot... back then (maybe), though I'm pretty mundane these days. Thanks for the compliment Jay, you naughty flatterer! ;)
BlueLotus7
A truly sensory experience going on here...dark with horror, but ripe with trust.
cagewench
thank you :)
SJConnick
superb job exploring senses that as seeing people we're unable to fully appreciate or experience the heightened strength of our other senses through the loss of one.
cagewench
glad you liked it :)
cynlee
luv this one... have a weakness for clowns & mimes :]
cagewench
clowns TERRIFY me, but I love mimes :)
Shadowmonkey
The greatest fear I have is of clowns, horrible things. Wow is all I can say I flowed so well rippling as it went. The idea is strange but put beautifully with the words you chose..
cagewench
I completely confess it was a strange idea and I'm not sure what prompted it...