Insipid ignorance by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jan 03, 2005

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couldn't sleep, had this one in my head so here it is... was feeling a lil experimental

and the pic... well, I had the bright idea to try and take a pic of the inside of my throat but it turned out to be more my mouth than my throat and I colourized it with red... yes, I'm odd, it must be because I require sleep ;)

Insipid ignorance
melancholy monotony mechanical monogamy
tired eyes cannot see
structured seduction superficial sensuality
gagged mouth cannot speak
insincere innocence insipid ignorance
stifled soul cannot breathe
mollified madness melodious mutiny
broken heart cannot beat
violated virginity volatile vicissitude

Comments (16)

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meico

4:26AM | Mon, 03 January 2005

Pithy pungency personified!

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eternalwytch1

4:31AM | Mon, 03 January 2005

A wonderful ode to the muse of sleeplessness

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nocturnecsh

5:39AM | Mon, 03 January 2005

"Stifled soul - cannot breathe" - pretty much sums it up for me. Insomnia has an amazing effect upon you. LOL

netsia

9:22AM | Mon, 03 January 2005

alliteration always ahead ;)

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cagewench

9:47AM | Mon, 03 January 2005

LOL!!!! Thanks all :)

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experimental

1:12PM | Mon, 03 January 2005

This one truly is fascinating. I can really feel the melancholy in the rythym of the words.

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cagewench

3:01PM | Mon, 03 January 2005

thank you :)

ann0314

3:22PM | Mon, 03 January 2005

Really enlightening in a way....excellent play on words and actually I think the tongue piercing almost works better than what the back of the throat would...the metal on flesh thing works for the poem I think...or maybe I am nutty ...hard tellin LMAO :O) EXCELLENT JOB!! :O)

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cagewench

4:05PM | Mon, 03 January 2005

That's a good point... my whole idea re: getting a throat pic was that it might be hard to identify and seem as odd as the poem ;) Thanks Ann!

SJConnick

12:40PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

BRILLIANT! my gawd, i have goose bumps. this is brilliant. i can't say that word enough here. i am stunned. not too often am i speachless...you've done it again. sheer brilliance.

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cagewench

12:45PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

damn woman, you'll swell my head ;)

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classyladytwo

10:51PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

Seems a bit strange then again what do I know I certainly am no writer and certainly never claimed to be one. great poem I think all the right words are there seems a bit choppy maybe just me:)

cynlee

11:20PM | Tue, 04 January 2005

excellent, excellent, ecspecially the photo! :]

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cagewench

12:19AM | Wed, 05 January 2005

cyn: thanks sweetie :)

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Shadowmonkey

2:34AM | Thu, 06 January 2005

The photo is quite erotic (it might be that I am a little strange with this thought). The words you write intrigue me, as to your thought process behind the ones you use, tiredness can create an interesting mix of insanity, surrealism and sensuality. An excellent post with out a doubt though ;0)

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cagewench

6:05AM | Thu, 06 January 2005

thanks ShadowMonkey :)