non-winning "Drama in a small space" entry by me by cagewench

Writers • Challenge • posted on Jan 08, 2005

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Description

Feeling wonky today so just posting what I wrote for the "Drama in a small space" script style challenge

Scene: Blinding white light, fades to repetitive highest speed strobe, draws back to reveal a spinning, shining disco ball

Comments (14)

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squeeka

1:43PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

Wow!!... I like it :) Cannot explain why but I could see the scene playing out in my mind as I read.. Awesome :)

ann0314

1:43PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

WOW...this is awesome and I could picture it playing out like a movie :O) Sorry you didn't win but ya know in art anything is a winner if it comes from your soul as all your stuff does...AWESOME JOB!!!! V :O)

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eternalwytch1

1:47PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

Time out... what a wonderful way to describe limbo. I love this piece.

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shemia

3:21PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

I read this on the contest page and liked it then. :o) It gave me goosebumps reading it the first time and I thoroughly enjoyed another reading. You should do more of these, you're very good.

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redbeard

4:23PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

Terrific, a fascinating scene that is wonderfully described!

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nocturnecsh

4:26PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

Hey, this one's a definite winner in my book! I agree with eternalwytch1: what a wonderful way to describe limbo! I betcha there ain't a "Gameboy" to play with in that time out either! ;-)

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cagewench

5:11PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

hey, thanks everyone :) It's not the normal sort of thing I write at all, but I have a toothache today and I wasn't inspired to write anything new, so I thought I'd post this instead... glad you like it :)

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Shadowmonkey

6:05PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

An interesting scene you put forward to us. In limbo so much I feel could be possible, and so many view of how it would be are in every ones mind. I like your view and the scene flows nicely.

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DirtyFairy

6:31PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

wow awsome scene setup. very unusual story line. i loved it!

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cagewench

7:17PM | Sat, 08 January 2005

thanks :)

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STEVIEUKWONDER

6:11AM | Sun, 09 January 2005

Sorry about your tooth, but with brilliant work like this, I'm sure your vivd imagination soon found a way to deal with the offending tooth. Excellent! Steve :o)

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cagewench

9:17AM | Sun, 09 January 2005

thank you :) I still feel crappy, but today it's sinus-related... :(

SJConnick

2:27PM | Mon, 10 January 2005

WOW! That is AMAZING. Not what I was expecting at all, which I am assuming was the point smiles What a wonderfully different way to take the idea. V

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cagewench

3:13PM | Mon, 10 January 2005

thanks hon :)