Now thats disturbing and a little depressing to read. Its very well written and your emotion is portrayed very well through this. Thank you for sharing.

It's wonderful to see that even through all the negativity expressed in this piece, your last line leaves us knowing that you're strong and haven't given up hope. Don't ever give up hope. This isn't Monopoly, always remember that Nick, always.

Wow, I'm not sure what to say except that I can feel your pain through your words. Realization is the key to change. If you know you've made people unhappy if you know you've hurt them and you care enough for them, you can always change and unless there is too much damage done most relationships can always be repaired. I wish you the best and I hope things work out for you.

"But I seem to fail so much, " --- according to whose standards? Yours or someone else's? Maybe 'failure' is not really 'failure' but ''learning''??? .... Well written. Hang tough.

I'm glad you caught on, tall pockets actually the poem is weird it is about me, but not negitive in a sense its ment to mean I had to be alone for a while to better me i wasn't changing for other people I felt i was failing myself by staying so depressed its why in the end i said i wont be in the end sort of like a butterfly going in to a coocoon hope that helps

a metamorphosis....brought Kafka to mind for me....my ALL time favorite author and 'Metamorphisis' is my fave story. V