I Wish by broken_dreamz85

Writers • Music • posted on Jan 12, 2005

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I got problems over exceeding my limit Sadness is my reality, sorrow I

Comments (5)

SJConnick

1:41PM | Wed, 12 January 2005

This piece reminds me of the style that "Sweatshop Union" uses in their music. Nicely done! Keep up the good work Nick

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TallPockets

2:57PM | Wed, 12 January 2005

Wonderful written rhyme/work. V Keep on "wishin' and hopin'" (old Dusty Springfield song - my days- WINK).

netsia

8:32AM | Thu, 13 January 2005

"I got love, tough or not" Very chilling thought to me....the whole tough love concept, hypocrisy/Just say no Nancy[pardon me while I take this pill]/BS. This has had an impact and I am so glad you posted this. Evoked alot of thoughts, what good writing should do. V

broken_dreamz85

11:47AM | Thu, 13 January 2005

This poem was made for it's gonna sound weird but the people that look up to me for problem n stuff im telling them its a harsh world and also for my children if i have any type of concept

cardiacxarrest

3:22AM | Mon, 17 January 2005

Fantastic. Throughout the whole poem I felt as if I was right beside you while you were telling me not only your life story but you're take on the world today. I absolutly love it.