Vanished Part Three by eternalwytch1

Writers • Science Fiction • posted on Jan 12, 2005

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I awoke before Sam, restless and in need of coffee and something to do. I found the coffee, poor stuff that it was and made my way to the bridge. Hardcore was there, having slept in the center seat. He nodded to me and I took over a console, delving into the ships files. I had to be useful outside of being a mind killer. I worked quietly, only glancing up when Sam kissed me on the neck. I started to apologize, but she kissed me and whispered;

Comments (11)

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TallPockets

2:59PM | Wed, 12 January 2005

"The notation read; Price, fifty thousand. " --- TallPockets might not even fetch fifty bucks -sigh- WINK --- you write extremely well - just scare the heck outta' me. V

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eternalwytch1

5:38PM | Wed, 12 January 2005

Thank you both. And Tall? You dahlink are priceless. HUGZ

netsia

8:20AM | Thu, 13 January 2005

ewytch1-this is an excellent story....not all that far from reality is some ways....evil is universal. Ever heard of Bechtel and the Sierra Madres? ;)

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NothingNess

9:23AM | Thu, 13 January 2005

This is my favorite line "sex dens and breeding pens" that conjures up so many horrible images. You do write so well. You string words together like I've never read before and they are a delight to read.

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eternalwytch1

9:38AM | Thu, 13 January 2005

Thank you both. :-)

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meico

10:22AM | Thu, 13 January 2005

You are a most excellent storyteller.

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eternalwytch1

10:59AM | Thu, 13 January 2005

Thank you. :-)

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Shadowmonkey

11:29AM | Thu, 13 January 2005

It weaves ever deeper into, WHAT ON EARTH IS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!!!!! Well soon I hope to know. So many questions now hang in the air, the plot is thickening the story I sense will twist before it is done, but where will it go??? Need so much more, I must now (breathing heavily now). Excellent once again ;0)

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eternalwytch1

11:39AM | Thu, 13 January 2005

Thank you! Breathe now... :-)

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