Reflection (My second reply to I wish) by broken_dreamz85
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I sit in the dark, lookin at the marks the light leaves on my skin, if I had a heart, for my troubled soul, I could survive in a life of sin, no one knows the tears I hold, if you did it
Comments (8)
TallPockets
"the dark is great if you hold no hate, it shows no ugly or perfect, you see no faces there are no races, if we could only be like that, life would be close to worth it," -- Hard to argue from my humble perspective. Superb piece. V
SJConnick
I'm with TallPockets on this one. That line is amazing. Well done. Excellent writing Nick. V
NothingNess
I agree with TallPockets too. Those lines are superb!
experimental
You do seem to have a way of seeing fact in a world of fiction. Excellent writings.
netsia
"I cant change the world but the world aint changing me"....I share that thought with you. ;) V
broken_dreamz85
thank you i wrote that for the lil kids that look up to me just because i do something i wanted them to know they shudn't i quit doing weed, but that was for my reason that i did do it n i was just setting it straight its why i said just be you being me is harder to do thanks everyone tho i never thought my poems would be understood
Shadowmonkey
Your writing definitely has an interesting curb to it. So much description.
meico
As always your direct incisive style cuts right to the heart of the issue with the precision of a surgeon's scalpel. Great stuff.