Crying Out by FormingInYourMind223
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Description
I wrote this because I was abit upset with a few events that had happened, and so I felt I had to let out my anguish and let off abit of steam. So was born "Crying Out" and I hope all of you enjoy it.
"Crying Out"
I run into the darkness
Only to find the light inside
It's way too bright, some might say
But I just like the night
There's something about the light
That makes me feel so vulnerable
To find the truth is to find
What others could not in time
And find the thing that we crave most
The vengence of faith is yet to come
I take the hand of the fallen one
And he shows me what I never had before
The writings on the walls, they say
That someday things will be ok
The writing in red, I watch it glow
And the walls bleed crimson, and give to cold
I crawl myself into the open womb
And prey on the ones I wish to consume
So turn the back onto those you love
For now they seem to be your enemy
But truly you just haven't accepted
The change in them you didn't see coming
Pray to your god that they will forgive
Because now you feel cold without them
Allow the change to take place
And let things cool down
The walls cry out for some help
They wish to know why things are different
And that things are so complex
I hate the fact that this is finished before it started
I stood atop the mountain
And the creature inside me awoke
And made the biggest mistake I tried not to let happen
Because all is lost and things are bad
That things are growing in my own head
I hate the thing that I am being forced to become
I lay here now, and stare into the darkness and cold
The crimson blood glows and runs true
It's dark and cold and evil again because
I have been betrayed before anything else could happen
I try to deny these things inside my own eyes
Everytime I close them, I hear them say....
"We are watching you. We will make you pay."
Comments (7)
miserys_extacy
Gives me chills, I think I will be haunted for a little while... "But truly you just haven't accepted/ The change in them you didn't see coming" What a beautiful line! fantastic work, I don't think I have seen you work before, but I do hope to see more!
TallPockets
You young-uns sure scare the crapola outta' us old geezers. WINK. Well written piece.
netsia
Excellent....don't mind TP, he grew up on 'Lassie' and 'Ozzie and Harriet', don't tell him that Ozzie and Harriet were a sleeper cell for the terrorists LOL. I was reminded of Dante's Inferno. V
groovie2000
Very Deep. Next time, take the hand of the RISEN one and He will show you the way. His crimson blood runs down many a wall as well. Be thankful that your loved ones Can change. Mine cannot.
NothingNess
Excellently written, flows so well that it really creeped me out.
TimothyDrake
I will own you... Na just messin with ya. Good job hope to see more.
FireTemptress
"To find the truth is to find/What others could not in time" This is so true. I am so excited to find your works....