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Crying Out

Writers Youth Artists posted on Jan 18, 2005
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I wrote this because I was abit upset with a few events that had happened, and so I felt I had to let out my anguish and let off abit of steam. So was born "Crying Out" and I hope all of you enjoy it. "Crying Out" I run into the darkness Only to find the light inside It's way too bright, some might say But I just like the night There's something about the light That makes me feel so vulnerable To find the truth is to find What others could not in time And find the thing that we crave most The vengence of faith is yet to come I take the hand of the fallen one And he shows me what I never had before The writings on the walls, they say That someday things will be ok The writing in red, I watch it glow And the walls bleed crimson, and give to cold I crawl myself into the open womb And prey on the ones I wish to consume So turn the back onto those you love For now they seem to be your enemy But truly you just haven't accepted The change in them you didn't see coming Pray to your god that they will forgive Because now you feel cold without them Allow the change to take place And let things cool down The walls cry out for some help They wish to know why things are different And that things are so complex I hate the fact that this is finished before it started I stood atop the mountain And the creature inside me awoke And made the biggest mistake I tried not to let happen Because all is lost and things are bad That things are growing in my own head I hate the thing that I am being forced to become I lay here now, and stare into the darkness and cold The crimson blood glows and runs true It's dark and cold and evil again because I have been betrayed before anything else could happen I try to deny these things inside my own eyes Everytime I close them, I hear them say.... "We are watching you. We will make you pay."

Comments (7)


miserys_extacy

6:02PM | Tue, 18 January 2005

Gives me chills, I think I will be haunted for a little while... "But truly you just haven't accepted/ The change in them you didn't see coming" What a beautiful line! fantastic work, I don't think I have seen you work before, but I do hope to see more!

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TallPockets

6:56PM | Tue, 18 January 2005

You young-uns sure scare the crapola outta' us old geezers. WINK. Well written piece.

netsia

12:48AM | Wed, 19 January 2005

Excellent....don't mind TP, he grew up on 'Lassie' and 'Ozzie and Harriet', don't tell him that Ozzie and Harriet were a sleeper cell for the terrorists LOL. I was reminded of Dante's Inferno. V

groovie2000

12:49AM | Wed, 19 January 2005

Very Deep. Next time, take the hand of the RISEN one and He will show you the way. His crimson blood runs down many a wall as well. Be thankful that your loved ones Can change. Mine cannot.

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NothingNess

9:36AM | Wed, 19 January 2005

Excellently written, flows so well that it really creeped me out.

TimothyDrake

4:03PM | Wed, 19 January 2005

I will own you... Na just messin with ya. Good job hope to see more.

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FireTemptress

12:43AM | Tue, 01 February 2005

"To find the truth is to find/What others could not in time" This is so true. I am so excited to find your works....


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