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Misery

Writers Youth Artists posted on Jan 19, 2005
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Misery I feel so alone, left out in the cold. Why can't you see me, for what i mean't to be. I'm trying to hide, the pain held inside. Fighting for my life, I scream out your name. (chorus) Why can't i breathe, your killing me. Takin from your love, I am helpless. If you only knew, the stress you put me through. Grieving over you, alone i stand brand new. (chorus x2)

Comments (3)


miserys_extacy

6:08PM | Wed, 19 January 2005

Hello TimothyDrake, a pleasure to read your poetry! Wonderful piece. You need to re-read the fourth line again.. "For what I'm meant to be"? I hope to see more of your work sometime very soon and if you ever have any questions, you can send me a message!

FormingInYourMind223

10:19PM | Wed, 19 January 2005

This is a really nice piece TimothyDrake. There are a few spell errors, but other than that, it's great. Can't wait to read your next piece!

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NothingNess

8:54AM | Fri, 21 January 2005

You write beautifully of things that hurt and of feelings not too easily expressed.


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