Drink In The Air by FlutterbyeJo

Writers • People • posted on Jan 21, 2005

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Trying to work some stuff out in my head... why does my work always end up rhyming lol!!! Bitter and twisted, gnarled and knotted, years to forget but always besotted. Wind beaten and chewed, eaten and clotted. The months of despair take years to repair. though slow and steady, stair by stair, I must reach for the sky and drink in the air.

Comments (7)

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TallPockets

10:05AM | Fri, 21 January 2005

Rhyme on. Excellent. Sounds like you've got things all figured out just fine (unlike T.P. WINK). V

FlutterbyeJo

10:11AM | Fri, 21 January 2005

Hehe thanks :)

netsia

10:16AM | Fri, 21 January 2005

Hi Jo, this is excellent!"The months of despair take years to repair." Remember, it all turns on a dime. The only constant is change and that is a good thing. :) V It is so good to see you here. :)

FlutterbyeJo

10:24AM | Fri, 21 January 2005

Thanks, it's good to be back :)

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meico

12:10PM | Fri, 21 January 2005

Yes ... the rhythm/rhyme pattern certainly helps the flow of this really nice piece of verse. One spelling mistake [hope you don't mind me pointing it out] "knarled" = "gnarled"

FlutterbyeJo

12:46PM | Fri, 21 January 2005

Yep I did look at that and thought there was something wrong, I suppose I shouldn't have been so lazy and actually looked it up blush thanks :)

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