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You Bring Me Life

Writers Youth Artists posted on Jan 23, 2005
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This poem is so corny, but this is how I feel towards my girlfriend. We don't see each other often due to issues between our parents, but I'm hoping that will all go away soon. So, anyways, I hope all of you enjoy this, and hope you don't laugh too hard. Thanks "You Bring Me Life" I lay here by your side And I start to cry softly Because there's just something about you That makes me feel so alive You make me feel like I can never die I feel your heart beat along with mine Do you realize that I love you? Do you know that I can't stand to see you cry? Just looking at you makes me burst with happiness I want you to stay by my side Because without you I'm nothing I want you to be safe with me Listen, do you hear the song of our hearts? They tell the tale of how we met That day you seemed so shy It took you awhile to tell me you liked me But when you did, I felt great And I feel even better now So tell me, are you happy? Are you glad that you are lying here beside me And not by yourself anymore? If you want to, you can stay We can make this moment last And just lay here within each others arms You are more beautiful than the moon And your smile is like the warm sun Your eyes are like the great green meadows I could get lost in them for hours Your soul cries out to me for love I hear it, and I reply to it with a kiss So let us lay here on this bed Lay beside me in my arms I don't want to move from this spot I kiss your forehead gently And I whisper into your ear "I love you" and close my eyes

Comments (5)


lostandconfuzed

4:47AM | Mon, 24 January 2005

thats so cute and romantic. i hope you give this poem to your girlfriend...i think she would fall inlove with you forever! bravo!

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meico

7:22AM | Mon, 24 January 2005

Never never apologise for feelings, openness and romance - all are in too short supply nowadays when misery angst and gore seems to dominate internet writing. This was well written and a refreshing change.

miserys_extacy

12:59PM | Mon, 24 January 2005

Just lovely. I am in complete agreement with meico, apologies are often a waste anyway. It is wonderful to see this side of you!

x_broken_minded_x

10:44PM | Sat, 05 March 2005

hey there..i hope that the girfriend has read this because i know you personally,and her, and i know you are a sweet person, and if this doesnt pull her in, then im clueless..keep it up

efry_e

12:28AM | Sun, 20 March 2005

Romeo and juliette. :D I stopped reading it after few lines, because it's really emotional and strong. You have so much love to give. hahahaha I totally agree with lostandconfused. :D:D:D


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