~~ In Search of Avalon~~ by Blush
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In a distant land called Avalon you can hear of a great kings glory
A haunted voice from the past tells the legend of Authur's story
From far away places you can hear the echoes of his wail
Drifting across the oceans, touching hearts with the fearless tale~
Mighty in his battle, gentle in his way with the opressed
Fierce in defending his kingdom with the magical sword he possessed,
Marriage was arranged with the fair Gunievere to be his queen
Protesting words from Kings council, Merlin did nothing to intervene~
A round table full of knights with Sir Lancelot by his side,
Unaware of the atrocity Lancelot had commited with his bride
Betryaing od the secrets fell upon the kings ear's
They were banished from the kingdom, a punishment most severe~
The unsavory antics of the duo brought about Authurs demise
Drawn into battle with Modred, a traitor in his uncle's eyes
Defeating Modred he is wounded, and then taken to Avalon
In a chapel he lives out his last hours,Sir Bevedre looking on~
Somewhere in the forest there is a chivalrous knight weeping in shame,
Fleeting were his pleasures, legendary is his fame
Mourning over his kings grave stood the knight Sir Lancelot
Wandering through the Isle of Avalon, in search of Camelot~
((((( My mom had several seizures Friday and her heart rate dropped by down into the 30's please continue to keep her in your prayers and me also she is in ICU in gaurded conditon..as always thank you for you views comments...:)))
Comments (32)
webshadow
Incredibly beautiful prose the conjures up visions of beauty, courage, betayal, and destiny...it needs no image, my friend...for it depicts so many of it's own. Nice to meet you, as well...Hugs for both you and your mother...sending prayers and positive energy to you both.
DennisReed
Exquisite poem Susan! Conjures up all sorts of visions! Bravo! Keeping you & your Mom in my prayers! Hugs!
Elfenone
Oh hon, this is beautiful and the legend of Camelot is one of my very favorites. I love this. God Bless you and your mother. HUGE HUGS
ZOT
You and i must hear the same voices... i shall remember you both in my prayers and well past this day.
evielouise
awwww susan that is so lovely you can see the knights and you can vision almost the happenings just reading your beautiful words: vote vote vote!! My prayers with you always hugs evie:
tvernuccio
Sis, your writing transports me to another world!!! I feel like i'm right there in this other time!!!!! You are truly gifted!!! my thoughts and prayers are with you and your mom. I'm so sorry for all you both have been through!! hugest hugz sweetie, and be careful out there on the roads. they may be slick tomorrow!!! Love ya lots!!!! sheila
cynlee
beautifully written!! from the days of lore :] the vigil continues for you & mom
kenwas
A fine poem. Congrats on some excellent work!
qmont
Susan, i am so sorry to hear that news, my heart and prayers go out to the both of you my friend. Just try and keep the faith, and that all will be made right, God does listen to us, i know that, Sweetie what your going through has to be rough and painful, take care of yourself and be strong, you will always be in my prayers.........Huge Hug.....John
STEVIEUKWONDER
How awful Susan, that your Mother is so unwell. You must be beside yourself with worry. Beautiful poem. Always lovely to read your expressiveness, through your beautiful poetry. Well done and take care my friend! Steve :o)
findme1999
great, i like how the whole story start to finish is in the poem, although such a sad ending
awadissk
Very well done work!!!!!!!!!!!! hope your Mom gets better!
Hyria
I too love the story of Camelot and yours is a great one. :) I agree with webshadow, no need for an image. Your prose is enough of a vision. I'm sorry to hear of your mom. I hope she gets better. :)
wildfire2003
Ah yes, in days of old it was such a romantic period! beautifully written hon! prayers are still with you and your Mom, keep the faith!! Hugs!!!V
avalonfaayre
My favorite story. Still praying for Mom, and for you and your family, sweetie. I loved this.
TallPockets
Susan - First, my best to ya' and your mom. PEACE. Second, brilliant written work. V (Methinks I would have been a 'dragon' in earlier times? Kinda' like the one Fred Flintstone had? DINO! Made ya' SMILE? WINK).
GOLDILOCKSUK
I am so sorry to hear about your mother, I will keep her in my prayers. This is a beautiful poem well written and created about a great legend. Fabulous (V) Cathy oxoxox
sadlers5
beautiful poem and i will keep her in my prayers...stay warm,ann
davidoblad
A most wonderful poem Susan. I can hear it being sung with the accompaniment of a lyre in the days of magic and romance. Super job here and Vote! Dave :^) p.s. Keeping you and yours in our hearts and mind.
madame
This is so beautifully written... I always loved this story ! Keeping you Susan and your Mom in my thoughts :) !
sossy
I agree with all the others here! it's a beautiful and touching poem! Be very sad to hear the sad news! all my prayers and thoughts are with you! wish you and your mom all the best! warm hugs!
romanceworks
A marvelous poem - you captured the romance of these characters. Sorry you and your mom are going through so much. CC
ObsidianLogic
sorry to hear it hun as allways my wishes for the best for both of you
captainparsa
thank you ,very romantic
vlaaitje
How sad Susan that your Mother is so unwell, she is in there for a long long time already.....I thought somewhere in July last year.....It must be a very hard time for you to get in there for so many months....in and out the hospital all the time cost a lot of energy for both of you....I hope your mom doing better soon..and how about you? I can remember me that you have had problems with your lung? Is that okay now, or you have still that same problem....how sad that two of the family are so sick....but God will be watching over you and your mom.....I hope so...but I am happy for you that you have a lot attention, because without friends you will not make it.....and you have a lot so far I can see....take good care of your self.....and before I forget....what a wonderful words you wrote, you are v ery good in poetry...
Richardphotos
I am sad that your mother is so ill. with the will of god maybe she can improve. My thoughts are with you as you go throught this ordeal. the prose is very lovely
Sapphyre_net
My best to you and your Mom,.... and sorry to hear of these troubles. May God bless you both.
ann0314
Incredible writing...and I guess that answers my question about your mom :O( Gosh sweetie I am so so sorry I am sure these are rough days for you....and I will continue to keep you both in my thoughts and prayers :O) HUGE HUGE HUGE HUGS!!! COMING YOUR WAY!!! :O)
Irish
A very beautiful poem about such a lovely place and time ~ sad and romantic. Keeping you and your Mother in my thoughts.
Shakti27
Fantastic prose - really conjures up the Arthurian legend in a stunning way - might make for a good series of Poser images for each stanza S Hope your mom is doing better now than she had been then - I'm close to my mom too and I know how that is all too well HUGS (glad to meet you as well S)