~~In Memory Of My My Mother Pauline~~ by Blush
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Mom,
I do so grieve now
As the days go slowly by
I wasn't ready to let you go
As I bid your life goodbye~
On a spring breeze you left me
Another path you made,
Yesterday is gone forever
But my love for you will never fade~
You passed clouds and rainbows
Radiant light touched your face
As the angels wings expanded
Your precious love was then embraced~
Some days my life is so lonely
And some are so very sad
But those moments we spent together
Were the best I ever had~
But now you walk with God
With angels at your side,
Beautiful gardens now surround you
That fills heaven's wondrous sky~
Time will go on without you
But your love will always have a part
Of warm and loving memories
That I will always treasure in my heart~
((( Just penned this a few days ago...there still isn't a day that goes by that I don't cry...it just seems so unreal she is not with me anymore and oh I miss her so..Thank you all for the IM's and the prayers and the images... I used Awadissk's image he did for my mom in this tribute to her..(This is the thumbnail image of it)Please continue to keep me in your thoughts and prayers..You all are wonderful and I am so glad to be a part of this loving family here on Renderosity..Any and all comments are appreciated:)))))
June 20th 1918...... Feb 19th 2005
Comments (38)
Visionsary
This really touched me and my girlfriends heart alot. Very deeply in a feeling that we all possess, understand and sometimes wish not to have to go to. Our hearts go out to you. Lovely poem.
Shakti27
HUGE HUGS hun this is so beautiful yet so sad - I'm very close to my moms and I know how painful it must be to lose someone so dear to you. My condolences as well - we're all here for you hun.
stevermstrong
Hello Susan...wonderful words from the heart...I'm sure your Mom was so proud to have you as a daughter. I keep you in my prayers and I hope you celebrate the live she lived....Peace to you and wonderful render...cya
cynlee
heart wrenching beautiful tribute & poem for your mom susan... big hugz
sharky_
My prayers and thoughts are with you. Aloha
anniemation
Sorry for your loss.
qmont
Bueatiful words Susan, my deepest and heartfelt condolences, a moment of silence..................................
romanceworks
A stunning and very heartfelt poem for your dear mother. I'm sure she knew in life how very much you loved her. It has been many many years since I lost my mom (I was seventeen) but the memories and the love for her never seem to fade. I'm so glad you were able to share a long life together. Hugs to you. :o) CC
tizjezzme
What a beautiful poem. So beautifully written, so deeply felt.
Hyria
i'm sure it is tough. just hang on tight to the memories and with that a warm breeze may kiss your cheek and her love will be felt. ((hugs and take care))
SNAKEY
A very beautiful poem...... sad......yet very positive........ life oriented.....even in death..... you pen marvelous poems my dear friend........... :O))
DennisReed
Such a wonderful poem for your Mom! I know she is smiling down on you, and that you have made her so proud! Hugs!
captainparsa
ooooo ooo oo**** oo**** o***** **
Shadowmonkey
Loss is a terible thing. I had never found the words I needed to say, your words are soft in there rythem. Simply beautiful my dear.
Elfenone
Hon.. you are just a wonderful penner of poem. Isn't it ironic that beauty as this comes from sadness? I feel your heart ache like a lump in my throat I can't swallow..even more so now,then when you first lost her. One thing I want you to know is that I do enjoy your poetry very very much. It's very well done and beautiful.
sossy
a wonderful tribut and touching poem for your mother! it's still very painful for you, but there will come another time and only time can heal our wounds! many hugs, Susan! ;o)
awadissk
Susan, this is very beautiful words, very touching, I don't know what else to say I will keep praying!!!
tvernuccio
huge hugz Susan!!! such a beautiful tribute for your mother!! i can't even begin to imagine what it must be like. i'm so sorry for your pain!! you are in my thoughts and prayers, sis, and i think of you often. huggggggzzzzzz
Luminaa
Such loving and beautiful words for your mother. Many prayers for you :( She's only as far away as your heart. She and I shared the same birthday :)
experimental
such a beautiful dedication to your mother, write on brave soul!
avalonfaayre
Oh, sweetie, we are NEVER ready to say "Goodbye". Not if we had a million years...I wish there was something I could say to help, but I know I can't. I am just here. Know that as time passes, the loss you feel doesn't go away, but the pain loses it's edge. Each day that passes brings you closer to the time when you will quit crying and mostly remember the good times. I am so sorry, and this was so beautiful.
Sapphyre_net
It's probably the most beautiful poem you've ever written, Susan. All of them are lovely, but this one is so full of love, and yet sorrow too. Your mom sounds like a beautiful person. Very deeply sorry for your loss.
davidoblad
It's been well over a year for me and I still grieve for my wife. It's very hard to go on when you lose someone so close. Eating a meal you remember was her fave. Watching a show, same thing.. It's hard.. My heartfelt sympathies to you Susan and your family. A most wonderful memorial poem above dear friend. I'm sure when you two meet again, the reunion will be a most joyful one. Blessings to ya and take care. Get some sleep and watch your weight! Time will lessen the pain. (I keep telling myself that, still waiting..) Dave :^)
evielouise
susan?? did I tell you that my sister who I lost a few years back was named Pauline? well yes and she was not just my sister but a great friend indeed like you to your mom and in time the hurt gets less,in time we realize they who have left would not want us to be saddened and we have to go on until like dave mentiones we meet again: I'm here for you sis!! always love evie...and lots of hugs!
Meezan
I love my mother and I cannot think of living without her, so I wont say that I understand your pain but your words touched me and I really am gona give a big hug to my mom when I get back home. May God bless you and your mother. She will be really proud to have you as a loving daughter.
madame
Dear Susan, I am really very sad to know that your mom went there. We have only one mom and we feel a big emptiness when we meet ourselves alone especially that you were very close to her. My English is not rather good to express all that I feel but know that I am in thoughts with you during these days of mourning which are always difficult to live. God is with you I am sure of it. Courage Susan, I kiss you.Your poem is absolutely marvellous and so wonderfully written your mother is surely very proud of you :)
danob
Sorry dear from the heart of sadness does such poetry spring hugz
STEVIEUKWONDER
Having lost my own Mother not so long ago, it has taken me much courage to comment on here Susan, but that doesn't take me away from my real point of offering you my sincere empathy and a big HUG! God bless you and believe me, it does get better and you start remembering more of times when you must have spent so many enjoyable hours, sharing secrets, sadness and successes with your Mom. I'm sure she is there for you right now. Take care, my good friend. Sincerely, Steve
bentchick
Wow, shivers up the back of my neck. I'm deeply sorry for your loss and can only tell you it does get better in time, but you never stop crying, and maybe you shouldn't, it shows how much a loved one affected your life, how close they were, how precious. My mom loved to write poetry. She was also born in 1918. I lost her in 1989, 9 months after my father. I miss them so much even now, but I always remember the good times. Maybe our moms are in heaven right now discussing their daughters and exchanging poetry. Love and prayers to you, God Bless! Kim
sadlers5
such a pretty pic, and poem too, hugs, we are fine, kids are keeping me busy, hang in there kiddo, your friend, ann